| Reviews for Total Drama Jurassic Park |
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Ms. Sleepy Clover chapter 15 . 12/18/2017 Owen being alive is a sin all together... |
Guest chapter 15 . 7/5/2017 Question,can you do a fan fiction were they cross over with the wrong turn series? |
justin chapter 3 . 6/13/2016 Duncan would've made it farther but I like ur season |
ewisko chapter 5 . 10/23/2014 This was pretty cool, and out of all the faster so far is the one that I enjoyed the most. You also made B interesting, something that I didn't think was possible due to how :Ling boring he is. The challenge was interesting too, and it's good to see that everyone notices Dawn and Harold's absense. Also, I really hope Katie's gonna die, due to how :Ling stupid she was with her remark. She deserves to be Dino food. And Tyler's joke at the end was very hilarious 'Dino crap?' 'As in T-Rex Poop?' That got a good chuckle out of me :D -ewisko |
ewisko chapter 4 . 10/13/2014 Wow, this was a great chapter! :D It seems that more of the contestants are growing in suspicsion about Isla Sorna, eh :) The challenge was pretty cool, and it's great to see that Da Tyler won :L I will also like to comment on the elimination, you using Brick's instead of Marshmallows is down right hilarious XD And now we have Da Harold's death, sad and now we have no idea what has become of Dawn!? I guess I have to read on and see :L -ewisko |
cookie chapter 1 . 10/12/2014 eye luv gurassick parc! pleez continyou! |
ewisko chapter 3 . 10/11/2014 Third chapter finished reading! :L All right this one was pretty good. We got to see more of the characters from the show and more of the dinosaurs that inhabit the isle. Cody was written quite well and I that he was in the spotlight for the majority of the chapter. And now he knows first hand what the dinosaurs on Isle Sorna are capable of. Which makes me wonder: Will he warn anyone? Dunno, I guess I have to wait til the next chapter to see. And for the first one eliminated we have, Duncan. I was kind of expecting that, considering he was a major :L during the challenge. I guess this ends my review thus far, and now I shall predict who will die first: Katie. Just got a hunch :L |
ewisko chapter 2 . 10/7/2014 Welp here's the second chapter! Let's not waste anytime and get onto the review,eh? Again a little short but I do like now that we now see the full contestant list. Also, and I know this is a bit heartless to say, but I seriously hope Courtney dies first. She's :Ling annoying, eh. Any who, I do believe that all of the contestants here are in character, with no glaring OOC moments from any of them thus far, which is pretty sweet to see. Although I'm a little confused with, oh what am I saying. If Da Zeke wishes to Pick his nose with chocolate milk, than by god he has the god given right to do it eh :D Another thing I will like to take note of is that I enjoy how you're giving some of the interns/camera crew personalities of their own, such as Dave and Fredrick. I'm intrigued if they will make a big impact on the story or not. There's also one minor, but nitpick that I have. When Cameron hear's the loud roar from the jungle, how does he know how many decibles it is. I mean unless he has a device that can accurately measure it, he can only make a rough estimate. And then he assumes that it's a new creature. I dunno, I thought the contestants would just think that Chris was just :Ling with them or something. But hey, that's only a minor nitpick and if that's the only flaw with the chapter, than it's still a fine damn chapter! :D -ewisko |
ewisko chapter 1 . 10/7/2014 Hey man, so here's the first chapter of Total Drama Jurassic Park eh? Now, I have seen Jurassic Park but I do admit that it was a quite a long time ago and I don't really remember a lot from the movie. I'll have to remedy that soon. Anyway in regards to this chapter I can't really comment much now, and due to this not a lot of the central characters are introduced yet (Except maybe Chris) But I do like so far how you're writing so far with all the little details. My one slight criticism however is that Hammond went from not granting Chris his request to get the island, to getting the island a little to quickly. Well maybe a little bit, and I think it would've been cool if we got to see Chris try his swindle his way into getting the island. But outside that minor complaint I like how the story is going so far, and am excited to see more of the central characters in the next chapter. Luckily because this story is already complete I'll read it right now! :L -ewisko |
The Sarcasm Master chapter 6 . 7/20/2014 NOT HEATHER AND B! Alas. At least B went quickly. Things are getting good, and I have to go for now, but I'll definitely come back to this later! |
The Sarcasm Master chapter 5 . 7/20/2014 I am envisioning Dave as Dave from PI. :P That being said, I am really glad Izzy is still alive, and things are heating up, it seems. Whoever is eliminated is LUUUCCCCKKKKYYY. Awesome job. |
The Sarcasm Master chapter 4 . 7/20/2014 Harold, you died with honor. I salute you. *salutes* It's a pity, but not all too surprising. My headcanon is that Staci was being purposefully annoying to get voted off, because she's REAAAALLLYYYY lucky that she wasn't eaten. I thought she was a goner, but...*sniff* Harold... |
MrAwesome1999 chapter 1 . 7/20/2014 Loved the chapter man! Looks like Chris is making a really dumb decision by hosting a season on an island like this but hey he's Chris. Anyways this was great and I'm gonna read some more as well :) |
The Sarcasm Master chapter 3 . 7/20/2014 So far so good! Duncan is gonna be really glad when he finds out what's going on on the island! I wasn't sure whether Cody was gonna kick the bucket or not, but fortunately not! I hope all o fthem survive, but if I had to guess, Katie, Staci, Cameron, Harold, and Ezekiel are the most likely deaths. But hey, you could surprise me! |
The Sarcasm Master chapter 2 . 7/20/2014 Intros to all the campers were awesome, and I can just tell Staci's going to make it far. NOT. Anyway, like the characters you brought back, and am looking forward to seeing how things will go wrong. |