This is a fantastic piece of work. I love every word of it, your writting is very delicate and emotional. Keep doing this please, I'd like to see more of your fanfics about Teen Titans.

well...the only thing is that he would've probably tricked her into carrying drugs for him or set her up to take the fall for him so she would go to jail in his place. or he would've used her for a human shield after putting her in a dangerous situation. or he would've tried to shoot her after revealing he was a drug dealer and she had unwittingly helped him with his deals. my point is, the story is good (very cleverly converted to an AU), but there should have been some kind of horrible, deliberate betrayal that would be comparable to Mal's genuine attempt to murder Raven as soon as he had what he wanted from her (fire blast, anyone?). Like he could've tricked her into losing her virginity to him (convincing her he loved her), only to drop her later. Even better if he tricked her into doing a 'deal' for him then dumped her and/or tried to kill her or screw her over to the extreme.

but anyway...lol i really did enjoy it, and I hope you'll write more stories for this pairing in the future.

Damn, I liked that! As soon as you mentioned the fancy sports car and the white packages in his pockets, you immediately reminded me of an idea I once had for a Raven and Malchior story.

Unfortunately, I can't write due to issues with Fanfiction and my inability to make an account. The idea was like an AU thing. No powers, but same people and characteristics. It's like Fast and Furious: Teen Titans Edition. Malchior is the Racing King, Raven his Queen. They had been dating for three years, the first one being perfect, the second one Malchior completely forgot she existed. The story takes place during the beginning of their third year "relationship".

Notice how I put the quotation marks around 'relationship'. Malchior starts bringing home other girls, doing drugs, getting into fights with Raven, and even beating her. The only reason he stays with her and she with him is that they are the best racers and that's the law when it comes to racing: the best stay with the best.

Raven's father is the local Mob Boss, I mean, c'mon, Trigon's a bad dude, he's gonna be a bad guy in an AU story. Raven dated Malchior's brother, Rorek, because he used to be the best driver, but then his brother beat him in a race and swiped Raven away from him. But then sweet, gentlemanly Aqualad comes around from Atlanta, Georgia (you know, like Atlantis) and steals her heart.

The plot is very simple. Raven's relationship goes bad with Malchior, a new guy shows up, she falls in love with him, Malchior has a life-changing experience and wants Raven to love him back. Adopt it if you want, I can't write it. You can have the credit.

Loving ou secretly from the shadows,

Whisper Dark Rose

Nice

love normal

Raven has the biggest bosom of all the girls, hips as wide as her shoulders and her shapely legs but maybe she has self-esteem issues

I always wanted Raven with Goth Boy with him like Captain Marvel with Rorek and Malchior his dragon familiar or have them some kind of amalgam like Dante or virgil from Devil May Cry with guns, sword, guitar that makes lightning storms, magic briefcase pull anything from, but black clothes

Personally I thought that Starfire would be happy for Raven either way. This was well written. Nice word choices

Amazing! Everyone was so in character, and the story was adorable!