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Yes! This was a hell lot of fun! Man do I love badass Takeru like this! He is just so cool! Just think of the scene when he was facing Pinocchimon alone or when he was beating the crap out of the Digimon Kaiser. Damn, I just love it!

.Atsuko Uehara

Loved it! I think I love a possessive Takeru. When he said that "No one can touch my Hikari-chan like that," that gave me the feels. I also read "Rain Drops" a couple days ago, and it was a good fic. Keep up the good work!

I think that this is my favorite out of all of your stories that I've read so far. It's the perfect mix of heroism, friendship, and romance. I especially love that the romance is TAKARI! I loved everything about this story. You did a great job keeping them in character, and I really liked seeing Takeru's possessive side, as well as Ken's loyalty and bravery.

Great job!

That was fantastic! Enjoyed every single sentence. :)

Really, really cute! I liked Ken's role and the humor at the end: especially everyone chasing after each other. I also liked when Takeru said, "you are." Well-written, cute plot, great story!

At the end was hilarious! I just kept on laughing!

Omg I love your story so much. A possessive t.k. That is soooo cute!

Loved it! another sucess haha I think you've listened the Tk's song "Focus" wich is beautiful, 'cause you've written about "Kari's heart focus" and if you didn't, I recomend it :) see you 'round :)

I absolutely love this. It's honestly one of the best one-shots I've read in a while over all. It has the perfect amount of everything. It's funny, cute, sweet, and so on. I love how TK (English version name...) protected Kari! (Hikari) I watched the English version of Digimon, so I don't use their Japanese names... Anyways, I loved that! I've always thought it cute when a guy is slightly overprotective of his girl. Not overly so, but just enough to be sweet. I was laughing when their brothers were video taping it. I felt really bad for them. I love his reply to her question on him fighting! He said she was! I love the scene with TK's confession! I almost wish that there was a sequel to this! It would be funny to maybe have their brothers force them to watch the video, together of course. I also think it would be cute to have them go on a date or something... I think I'll go to your profile and look for other Takari stories! To your profile! (I always put this... AMUTO FOREVER! :) )

[Ken had previously, wisely, escaped from the room when he felt the death glare Hikari send to Takeru, and decided that he should not be there when the girl attempted to strangle her best friend.] "send" should be "sent".

['Just wondering if Suga and his gang would still be breathing if you had not stopped me.' Hikari rolled her eyes in desperation, giving up on refuting his logic that made no sense to her. 'Boys,' she muttered, 'always thinking that their fists can solve everything.'] You can't have two different people speak in the same paragraph. In this case, make Hikari's dialogue in a different paragraph.

[Some hurried to go to their respective club rooms for extra-curricular activities, while some just slowly packed their things and prepared to go home.] There shouldn't be a hyphen in "extracurricular".

[Once she asked Sora and Mimi about it, and they looked at her as if she was an alien from another world, ready to eat digimon alive.] "was" should be "were".

[A few of Hikari's friends managed to pull her away, afraid that she would get hurt, while she only eyed Takeru carefully and hoped that he would not do something stupid, as to get himself kick off from the championship match in the coming weekend.] "kick" should be "kicked".

[She really had no idea how she muttered up the courage to pull her prince down and engulfed him with a shower of kisses.] "muttered" should be "mustered".

There were also a couple times when you accidentally switched verb tenses. Also, I want to let you know something about the word "brunette": The word "brunette" is used only for girls while "brunet" is for boys.

But I agree! I absolutely love protective Takeru! I've always imagined that it would be so like him to do anything to make sure Hikari is safe. :D I really liked the addition of Ken in this fic; it was a nice touch. And I loved that little kissing session with Hikari and Takeru. Lol, I should've seen that coming. They were near a bed, for God's sake. And the end... that was just hilarious. It sounds so like Taichi and Yamato to use that as future blackmail and, well, to do that in the first place.

And, honestly, I think you kept everyone in character. :)

Great one-shot! It's going straight to my favorites!

Great story! I'm not personally a huge fan of Takari, but I enjoyed this none-the-less! I thought everyone was also perfectly in character, just so you know. :) Or at least, from what I know of them. I haven't seen all of 02 yet... *Sweatdrops* lol, and one more thing? The ending was hilarious! XD And "prodigious"... love how that was added! 3

Now, onto the story itself...

I enjoyed how you portrayed Suga... personally, I hated his guts and was quite pleased when the crap was kicked out of him. x) It's always a good sign when an author can pull that kinda thing off. XD

Takeru's two sides... clever how you showed that off here, even if it's not entirely accurate from what I know. ;)
Personally, I can see Takeru and Ken fighting alongside. It just seems almost natural, if they weren't always so calm.
Oh, and the action scene? It was quite interesting to read and I certainly enjoyed it, but it was obvious that writing fight scenes is not your strong point. I recommend working on them, but as I said, I enjoyed it regardless. :)

Heh, I certainly imagined the big bros as pranksters! XD
As for the added ending? Well, if you ever get around to it, why not make it an extra chapter?

Sorry if that review seemed kinda scattered... I read this at 11:00 at night... *Sweatdrops again, yawning* Well, night, and keep on! :D

I don't know why, but my favorite line from the story was definitely 'WAIT TILL MIMI AND SORA SEE THIS!'. It made me laugh so hard. ;)

Anyways, lovely story. I think the kiss was a little overkill, them being in middle school and it being their first kiss and all, but absolutely brilliant otherwise.

I love the way of the takeru's declaration, it was so sweet and sexy at the same time, just amazing good job:)

This was a cute story. I don't mind a bit of OOC since it gives you a little more freedom with the characters. Just as long as it isn't over-exaggerated. I think you did alright with the fight scene. It was descriptive and easy to imagine what's going on. I wish Ken got a little more action in that fight, but there's only so much you can fit in a one-shot. Plus it's Takari so I can't complain lol. Lastly, I'm glad to read a TakeruxHikarixKen fic(even though it's Takari focused). Whether it's friendship or romance they're my OT3 3.