I really like your story, it has an interesting concept, but it is incredibly difficult to read with all the typos and misspellings. In one case in this chapter, Hyorinmaru - "she shit through the roof." I wish you better proofreading in the future, and look forward to seeing how this story plays out.

this is cool, please tell me there is going to be more

Interesting take on the story. Can't wait to see what else happens.

*thumbs up* for this story

This was a brilliant chapter, I could feel the anger Hyorinmaru had, how lost Histugaya felt now without his zanpaktou at his side. Your writing has improved greatly from years ago and your stories are much easier to read now

Ooo why are they a special case? I wanna know! Update soon:D

Great story. Can't wait for more.

Poor shiro! Plz update soon!

Good chapter. I do want to get something clear toshiro was being controlled by him and then released and collapsed. right. other than me being confused like normal. I kbps the first chapter.

Nice opening, I like Hyorinmaru outfit though am curious as to why he and hitsugaya were a special case, Oo, Can't wait to see the next chapter! Update soon or whenever you can! :D