Ugghh I happened to haven’t read this story before and I’m rereading it now ..
Why oh WHY are all your stories incomplete ?
I WANNA KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN

Flamebelt, why? I was so excited to find this. I had somehow managed to never read it before! It was just what I was in the mood for too, I awwed at how adorable they were when they were little, cried when they moved away, chuckled at Ur and Hotaru's antics. I love how much personality you put into your characters, as always. Was amazed at Gray telling Igneel his intentions, and then you ended this chapter like this? And there's no more? How could you do this to me?

I want to know what happens :( you meanie. All teasing aside I hope you finish this someday, or at the very least be a good friend and tell me what you were planning *grin*

Love,
~mdelpin

I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH IT'S ACTUALLY UNHEALTHY. PLEASE UPDATE OR I'LL CRY AND BE REALLY SAD. HKNESTLY THO THIS IS AMAZING AND SO ARE YOU

Please! Update!

Please update! Please!

UPDATEEEE

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WHY LEAVE IT LIKE THAT
WHY HAVENT YOU UPDATED IN NEARLY 2 YEARS
MY HEART–
I CANT–

PLEASE UPDATE

Heyo! I decided to re-read this story and, OMG, I forget how much it was cute! It was so well-described, so simple in a good way, pure :D Loved it again! :D

Update. Hurry.

Dam how can u be so good? I am love wit this story.. But plz let Natsu remember Gray soon... I dont want thm to be like this... N wow Erza is something...beatin thm up. Any wat i love ur story... I will wait fr ur update... *bows* thank u fr this lovely story.

please update... I have been dissapointed with to many stories that just stop without any warning lately... this story has so much potential, i cant stand to see such a good story just stop before it actualy ...

Dear FlameBelt-sensei,
You are a horrible person, making your readers wait that long for a new chapter... and you know what makes it even worse? The fact that this storie is absolutely amazing. You are an evil, horrible, terrible human being, making people wait for somthing this good. Put yourself in our shoes, this is torture! Do you like torturing your readers, oh FlameBelt-sensei? Please update soon, I (and probably most the readees of this story) will be be waiting for you.

Are you still gonna continue this? *frowns* Please, I want to know what will happen next, I'm dying here you know, DYING! Continue it please, *cries a river* I swear, you are one of the inspiring authors that inspires me to read! And last updated...june?! You have to continue it Flame Belt-sensei! :(

Just finished re-reading this and when I stopped I realized something odd. And it leave an unsettling feeling in my gut that something's wrong.

Then, a question popped in my head;
"Wait. Have I reviewed this story? *frowning*"
That's when everything fall into places.

I haven't reviewed this story!
No wonder I felt weird!
I was like...
"Oh my God, I've read this story like a lot already and I never reviewed?! *gawked*"
I thought I did. Turn out I didn't... *blank face*
Yeah... suffered a momentary memory loss. *covered my face and sobbing*

Okay, sooooo back to the story:
I really, really LOVE the plot development.
I liked that you started their story from when they were like BABIES.

It's like watching your own children growing up, struggling in their teenage years(which is happening in the latest chapter you've uploaded for this story), finding their ways and love in life until they finally become a grown up adult. Sighs...

And I LOVE the characterisation!
I like that you made Ur a BADASS woman! I like badass women! Hahhahahahh!
And Igneel! Oh Gawd. That over-protective, over-obsessive streak over his son makes this story light-hearted and enjoyable. And cute. SUPER. CUTE. (You don't always see a Dad obsessing over his son in this world, it's a very rare species! xD But, as much as I love Igneel-san, I am totally gonna punch a hole in his face for saying such cruel things to Gray. HE WAS EIGHT YOU ASSHOLE!)
And Hotaru fit perfectly in this story!
DUDE, I FUCKING LOVE THIS PERSON! PUT HER INTO YOUR STORIES MORE. I WANT TO KNOW HER MORE. HECK I WANNA GO ON A DATE WITH HER! *-*

I can sensed angst in this story. A lot of ANGST.
But I DON'T CARE! I LOVE ANGST SO BRING IT!
*super masochistic mode on!* xD

Well, that's all I have to say for now.
I hope you enjoy this review! xD

P/s: I'm currently thinking of something that goes along the lines of; "a badass password" hmm... thinking...
If you know what I mean...
*evil smirk*

Adios, my love! xD

Oh golly, I have not read this in ages xD But don't worry I know what it's liked to not update something in a while! So I feel for you xD I'm guessing this is one of those stories you have to be in the zone for? xD

Anyway awesome chapter Although I am wondering if you're gonna bring in any other characters from the series into this? It might make it a little more interesting xD