Woah, this is really beautiful. I just wish that there will be more of RoyEd moment. But still, this is sweet too... Thank you for sharing this work with us.

i can't take off the grin on my face!
damn straight i love it! :)

It doesn't feel right if I don't review on ffnet too! I just love the direction you went with, I do! I already told you how much I love the scene where Roy shows Ed their new home, so I won't babble all over the place, again...

Well, I hope you're doing ok over there! Let's hope we both find enough time and inspiration to do more writing soon :

I'm glad you finally were able to publish this story here. You write all these characters with great assurance and flesh out the complexities of their emotions and interactions with each other. And it's always great to have another story with Chiaro, one of your best creations. As always, you balance action, great dialogue, and perfect description/word painting. This story builds wonderfully to a very beautiful ending. The last two chapters especially are just gorgeous. I'm really glad you took this challenge and created such a great story!

Such a grey ending to your first story. Man, chiro just can't catch a break with his paintings can he? But I think he wouldn't be the same artist he is if he got automail. Love your stories :)