Absolutely amazing, I really enjoyed this and while there were a few grammar issues they were very minor and didn’t impede the story

It was an amazing story, congrats.

That was incredible. I loved the scenes in hell and didn't think they were too confusing. I loved your world building too, the Mage Knights, the multiple levels of Knockturn, the different shops. I also loved Harry's progression as a character. Not too slow like some stories, but not too quick either. I didn't think he'd be able to give up Loren, but it had to happen. He's have been too bogged down otherwise. I'm glad Natasha got to live, even if her life may be horrible knowing how many died for her to breathe. Dumbledore admitting to tampering with the Potters wasn't expected though I was shocked Harry couldn't take him on. I liked what you did to Ron and your OC personalities were great. Altogether awesome read.

Cool

Uhm what about the Phoenix years he has

The fucks wrong with you a minatour really what the legs dumb ass hes just gonna fall over not mention weird as fuck you have a minatour fetish or somthing im droping this

just finished your story and all i can say is wow.
i will be recomending this story to many people.
im kinda shook at this moment so i dont really have words.
just wow.
i could see this was the kind of ending thag was coming but just to read it was amazing.
i wouldve liked to see more, simply the future after the war. Did Zachary win? Did Natasha live and appeciate what her brother has done? Did Harry go down in history and what for ? Theres quite a few things i wouldve liked to see but at the same time i am not unsatisfied with how it did end.
great job and thanks for the entertainment this story gave me.

Great story and good job on actually finishing it. A bit too edgy in places, and some grammar and spelling mistakes, but I really enjoyed reading it. Would have loved to have read a bit more about how Natasha and Justice ended up, and Natasha's response to what Harry did though.

Still, can't have it all and the ending is pretty great and fitting.

Maybe I’m weird, but did anyone else cry when she died, even though the description said she would? Great story though, even if it’s a little sad... but it’s very good in that stories have to be particularly vivid for me to show emotion... great plot!

This is awesome

Holy hecking heck! This is so good! Woah!

What's the point of living if it just ends at a massive cliffhanger like that?

So much... Yet it feels like it's too short. I'm satisfied yet I still crave for more. What happens to Natasha? What happens to Harry? Why does it have to end like this?

Questions can only take me so far. Imagination will have to suffice. Bravo dear author for the excellent story that you've decided to grace us with.

Thank you.

Honestly you neglect writers take things way to far and have the distinct ability to make everything edgy cause you think edgy is cool.

I hope for a sequel or even an epilogue with zach talking to harry and understanding everything