Well done. Glad I red this.

Okay interesting start to the story, Characters seem rather interesting, and the villain team seems like quite the step up from the 3 stooges we've dealt with for so long.

Also I will give the characters style points for how they got out of the building... a bit over the top, but hey it worked. Also love the Unova jab

Overall this has potential, looking forward to what's next

I'm gonna say this now, I loved that chapter...Great ending. Best part was Tai and the others copying Team rocket...

I'm glad you found a new way to fit N into the story.

Tai's luck with catching cool Pokémon isn't getting any better.

Ash, Tai just lost his chance to get a Shiny Flygon. He has every right to mope...

Theres an erro where krokodile is there insted of infernape

Mind telling what you changed? because the notification lead me here, to the last chapter.

Rosa's reaction is probably how any normal person not used to the unnatural or has a life like Ash would react in this scenario she was in, this is a great chapter for character development.

that is a good finish here. Like it

Neat! Thought I am honest... I would have switched Lugias and Rayquazzas position. Mostly because I feel Rayquazza seems to fit better in the role of htestrongest Shadow Pokemon.

Alright! Rosa is in this! You misspelled Sawk. So Pikachu, Oshawott, Charmander, Rio and Ash disappeared?

The end! such a nice end, too. I will admit, the punctuation issues and some minor grammar problems had me reading lines two or three times to better understand them. The cast was really big and I liked that you had no regrets about using post-gen 3 mons. (I am envious of you about that.) And I got to like Tai, too, despite him being annoyingly childish sometimes. My favorite moments were when Tai was on a coffee high, when Emboar fought the giant Munchlax, when Rosa accepted Red and when Zekrom appeared to kick butt. So yeah...great story.

Dang it, why was this chapter so heart-wrenchingly good that I just had to review?! T_T

Dang it, why was this chapter so heart-wrenchingly good that I just had to review?! T_T