hassan is so sweet

I really liked this. To be honest, there's probably too many stories dealing with the rape scene, but this was well-written and really hooked my attention. Clearly you put a lot of thought into it. I like how Hassan still loved and care for Amir, despire the fact he sees him in the alley. I also really like your characterisation of Assef in this story; he's just as violent and just as psychotic as I remember him. Sometimes a word here or there was mispelled but it's nothing that can't be fixed. Well done on this story. :)

It's hard finding a way to describe this. I think you did a wonderful job on this story. It's really kind of heartbreaking to read and know about how devoted Hassan is to Amir.