i know these has years since being updated but ill say iit anyway

rip

him explaining to kids about his secret is turning me off now, he should just give half-truth.

I personally really liked this chapter. You may not be fan of the combat scenes or the letter, but as far as I'm concerned, your combat scenes were great and your letter was really emotional. I think you did a good job.

Best chapter of your fic ! The last arc with Phantom Lord had "tunred me off" to reuse your own words. It was basically just a retake of canon and I was afraid you would continue do that for the next chapters. This chapter reassured me and convinced me this is a great fic. Thank you !

It's really a great story. But honestly, as things go it's maybe better to not do any romance at all ? Is there even a need to ? A romanceless story would be quite refreshing honestly... Well, your call I guess.

Probably my least favorite chapter so far. I can never picture naruto cheating on a significant other. It seems so out of bounds for his character that it’s off putting and just makes him seem like an asshole. I don’t even understand why he would bend to that request... I mean the guilt was Incredible for him but he just ruts it away I guess.

Uh I can already tell this story is going to be terrible. Just by reading the intro it’s probably gonna be Naruto being depressed and angst. God I hate stories like this. You probably made him weak to so he can suffer and gain hope in his life or some shot like most stories of this genre try to do. Glad this story is dead

Pa the tic.

Dude that touched me in places it shouldn't have! But puns away , awesomely written character breakdowns never change it for any single word.

This feels like those explanations they gave after season 8 of Game Of Thrones
'Nuff said

You got skill as a writer but should have known from the name itself
It's basically gonna be stupid angst
Also Naruto cannot beat Jose
And somehow everything always goes according to FT canon
Almost like the Author cannot see it happening any other way
Don't be so afraid to leave rails of canon

Nice story so far, vut the filler is suck. Everbody here want to see grand magic game arc asap and you keep on those stupid filter, pathetic. Dropped out

Quite a read, took me hours to finish this. Got a bad feeling that you already dropped this or you had no time to write and continue this fanfic

Honestly, I thought this chapter was really good. It really showed just how broken a man Naruto is and that fits considering that his entire planet is basically doomed. Also the scene between Naruto and Mirajane worked really well as well.

So Naruto saves the world, and protects his former guild 'fairy tail'. Yet they still hate him, I mean come on author, have you heard about the saying 'action speaks louder than words'? If its like this then the characters you portrayed either have shitty morals, can't understand, or just scum that let prejudice and anger cloud their judgement.
That is not fairy tail