Man, there are so few completed Bionicle fics, I could scream! Your fic was so fun to read; made me feel like I was a kid again!

I think what Toa Nonny said about this story just about sums it up. This is like a canon story. You don't write like Greg Farshtey, but the plot, the characters, all that stuff was of Farshtey quality
Uh
The one story critique: Couldn't they have used a klakk?
And then there's a bunch of arguments rebutting that, like Shadow Takanuva might not have allowed them to leave, or Hahli might not have even known about klakks, or...uh...something.
So the way you did it was good.
Which means good story!

Oh. Wow.
I don't know why I didn't read this earlier.
This is a really well-written story. I'm going to finish reading it first and then review on its merits

This was AWESOME! :D I'm a huge fan of such detailed characters and you did a great job!

Awesome story, very well written. It reads like a canon story. The "good" Teridax has intrigued me since he came into the Matoran universe. I loved reading this story.

This was beautiful. You've done extremely well with this. Great job.

Wow, this story was so good! You are such a excellent writer! I love the complex chemistry going on between the characters.

This was really a great story, I enjoyed it very much. The structure was a little cluttered, but it was readable after a second glance. The flow of the story as a whole seemed almost exactly like the flow in the books, and the ending was just right for this kind of story.

The characterization was excellent, especially Makuta's. Hali and Jaller's interactions were the most heartwarming to me.

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Woo Hoo! That was a great story! Good Job!

Great Fic! I enjoyed it greatly, and thought it well done.

Good Job!

You have taken one of my favorite underdeveloped characters and made a masterpiece with him. Seriously. Your characterization of Alt-Teridax is just perfect, and this is a fantastic little story. Keep up the good work!