Reviews for Loyalty
laevenderdreams chapter 1 . 3/31/2015
Awwwwww this made me cry at the end! This is beautifully written, and I enjoyed it a lot.
TolkienGirl chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
GAH! Why you make me cry? Whhhhhhy?!

(*laughs and dries her eyes*) Wonderful one-shot. Tear jerker if ever there was one. Glad I'm not the only one who thinks Rex would disobey Order 66.
CJ-T-Bone chapter 1 . 3/28/2014
Ending on a sad note huh.
Guess it was a little far fetched to hope that Ahsoka and Rex would run away and make beautiful red children, but hey i take what i can get.
Good story and well worth the read. :)
Toolazytologin chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
That was beautiful! Just perfect! The writing was incredible and the ending was poetic. I loved it. Great job!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
That was beautiful! Just perfect! Omg I just...just loved it. Great job!
me1 chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
jesse could hav gone rogue too but i am not complaining
artylou chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
Awww that was so sad :'((((((
But great writing and ending! Fantastic job! :)
Crossroad Avarice chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
Amazing. Simply amazing - though the tense is not the one I'm used to reading, it flows smoothly - and I love the fact that you brought in Cut and Suu, and made that where Rex would go given the fact that he disobeyed the Order and brought Ahsoka with him - as well as the fact that Cut and Rex discuss Rex's mention of "family" in "The Deserter." Indeed, Ahsoka *is* part of his family. :3

I love the way you give little moments - where everything, despite what's going on around them, looks like it's going to be alright, and I love that you brought in Fives - though not necessarily immediately, I feel as though he *would* come around and defect in the event of Order 66.

And this ending...TT_TT It made me tear up. But it's a nice ending - at least they die together, you know? Wonderful, dear, wonderful. :3