Your writing is beautiful your grammar is perfect I was so immersed in the emotions and confusion of the underground tunnel I felt actual fear for Jack and my own life!

This Story is amazing and really well written.

Please sequel it was a beautiful story, add in the second one ( if you make one) why jack was chosen to be a guardian and the reason his memoies were taken away.

Seriously though, thank YOU. That was (well, is) amazing, and I'm sad that I finished it but hey I'll probably read t again sometime :P

NOOOO god I should have seen this coming... It seems inevitable, but cruel nonetheless. It was even Pitch that got him after all those threats... Well ha to Pitch but EMMA...jeez

Ah I can't stop reading this it is so good!

Oh my goodness... The feels...
Poor Emma!

No! Nononononono I do not like where this is going oh god please don't let him turn evil or something ah see this is an amazing story because I, and most likely all the other readers, FEEL something with each word. Brilliantly executed, my friend.

Grommet, the moon is made of cheese! XD

Interesting installment :) I shall continue...

Aha! The tooth ',:)

Haha ooh the sass! Way to go, Jack!

Dang I can't stop reading this. Good thing I have no plans for today :P

So wait, lemme see if I've got this straight, Jack is 18, Emma is 8, Sophie's roughly 8, and if Jamie's 2 years Jack's senior, Jamie's 20? But they were all on the same bus...? Was that bus not a school bus...? Sorry if I seem slow. I really like the story so far; your writing is very good!

I cried after finishing this. When it comes to fanfic, I've never cried unless something sad happened. This one was the first to make me cry without a super sad ending. I really wanted reading this though, I'll definitely be re-reading this in the future. I'm going to go check now for a sequel but if there isn't one you better get writing.

Please write a sequel! Pleasepleaseapleaseplease! I want the other's to meet Jack as Jack FROST! Please!