I love , lol

Wow, this was a really good chapter

Not happening. Calypso fell for Percy big time in BOL. That cannot happen again. And I'm disappointed in Nico. Percy's his cousin. And is Poseidon really dead? Probably not, if he's gonna reveal himself to Percy. And how come Thalia and Nico weren't recruited for the Olympians too. Can you say no fair and no sense?

Thief?

Amazing stoty. Hooefulky you'll continue the sequel

I love fics where I can just hate on Annabeth and Thalia and every other ****ing girl! Especially when they accuse him of stuff that weren't his own choices. They're such *****es, you know? And, no, fanfiction isn't censoring my words

really REALLY YOU LEAVE THE BOOK AND A FRICKING CLIFFHANGER

Umm

I really wabt an explenation on why Sally would Marry Gabe in this story. It makes no sense if he is not a half blood. Gabe was only their to hide Percys scent.

Is the sequel still on hiatus or will it be updated soon? I would appreciate a pm because I enjoyed this story a lot

Did you get Annaneth,s project idea from The Mortal Instruments? You know, Valentine reached Jace that "to love is to destroy"?

I really loved your story until you progressed too much into the relationships. Percy and Annabeth had questions to ask each other and Annabeth doesn't know Grover. She also didn't mention the abuse or other topics Percy mentioned while he was drugged and looked like a blond. You also skipped the training, which I was looking forward to after the cliffhanger about becoming a great swordsman, and totally confused everyone. Now Percy and Annabeth's mother know about the Olympians and the readers have little clue. In addition, Annabeth had no idea about the Olympians and would be confused upon hearing the term "son of the sea". Not just percabeth, but Thalia and Luke also progressed too quickly. Thalia can't be "charmed by his smile" if she is still hurt about his disappearance which US READERS don't know about. You leave out too information and progress too quickly. I had loved the story, but there is too much I'd like to change and cannot keep reading. Please rewrite and don't take this as a negative comment. Thank you and I hope to see more stories.

the Dreamer

Heh, dying whale noises.

interesting line breaks
also, the XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXLINEBREAKXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
thing makes the "X"s look slightly different sizes

How can I possibly express the happiness I get while reading your fanfiction? :) Although during the start of the story it was a bit boring and dragging, I really ADORE the way you stuck with the original thing (you know, Bianca's death and Nico being angry with Percy, and the Olympians thingy). This chapter ended exceptionally well and I love you for giving me a good fanfiction to read :)