So I've re-read this story plenty of times but never realized Bella calls Bruce Clapp "The Clapp". Even though we use "el" or "la" before first names in colloquial Chilean-Spanish, I always assumed it was something anglo speakers didn't do. So that makes me wonder if it's an intentional way of naming him by making use of a certain infectious disease with similar spelling?Idk, maybe I'm just reading too much into it.
Anyway, Clapp aside, it's always a pleasure to revisit your stories:)

This was beautifully written. I've been going through tough times and this has been such a nice distraction. So very well thought out and thought provoking. Your vamps are the best I've read. Thanks for sharing with us.
-Gigi xo

I can't remember when I've enjoyed a story as much as I have yours. Thank you!

Good story. Nice build. Well written. Thanks for your considerably contribution.

Hmmmmm. She is dying by the hour yet want to make long trips to have 5 minute conversations?

All that money spent instead of two 1cent phone calls?

Clear stretch for drama. The audience isnt suppose to notice how the magician carries out thier deception. And readers shouldn't feel manipulation of plot for drama sake. All are supposed to enjoy the show.

Nice on the Posole lol

I'm sorry but no matter how I see it the pack have no leverage. This whole Negotiation scene were a waste of letters on paper.

The pack cant win against all the Cullens and if they get one the rest would know exactly where to find them and thier families back on the rez. And If not that, they could tell other vampires where to go and swarm the whole peninsula. Because there are thousands of vampires and 6 wolves. Smh. They lose no matter what.

Makes no sense to give up a damn thing. Just tell them the facts of life ... remind them that the odds are against them and thier agenda is nothing but an attempt to hold back the tide with a broom

plus it was them that broke the damn treaty in the first place, and this is just the consequenceif having big mouths . smgdh again...whole thing was waste of words on paper. #unneccesarydrama

why are caring what the pack thinks. all obligations are done and over with... move on and change somewhere else. like duhhhhh

Sorry can't really get behind Bella's whining about becoming a vampire and having a "greater potential" of killing another person. (Accidentally)

having a bat, crowbar, knife, or gun in your hand gives everyone that potential

being a doctor, cop, pilot, soldier, or licensed driver increases that potential as well.

Anyone possessing any of the aforementioned can kill someone without meaning to. if they lost control. its call an accident. Shit happens and sometimes it really sucks. So what is she 'bitching' about? I really don't get it?

shit some sky diving pro could be tandem jumping and put his parachute on wrong... then they are both dead...accident. like get over yourself girlie. smgdh

This so-called conflict Seems like an unnecessary plot device that has been extended too long. #justsaying

Thank you for this lovely story and it’s serious elements that were handled with such dignity. I truly loved your work. Thank you!

Thank you

Finally

LOOOOOOVED THE FANFIC! You are a great writter, and I feel a littlle foolish, but Im from Galicia and when they said about their family ancestors , I was like YAS jajajaj , porfa, sigue escribiendo que se te da de puta madre, biquiños!, as se say hear in Galicia

I’ve read this story several times over the last few years and at the end of this chapter, every time, i just say to myself “god damn!” ...Because really, that last exchange was smoking hot 3
Ahhhh love this story!

Excellent story, loved every minute of it!

Well written but I’m surprised chapter one didn’t include a trigger warning.