Reviews for Isolated System
Guest chapter 3 . 4/26/2018
I loved it but i cannot immagine vegeta dressing up appropriately, he would just put on sweatpants that are hanging dangerously low on his hips and not even think about a shirt because he is badlike that.
Kitty in the Box chapter 3 . 11/7/2016
brilliant. I love the honesty. I especially love him stalking her.
Yuirii chapter 3 . 11/3/2014
Hi! It's very amazing! wooow I love it so much! i will read the sequel right now
Guest chapter 3 . 3/12/2014
Sweet. I'm glad I got into this one.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/12/2014
Those two overthink everything so much.

This is one of those chapters where it hits me how much of an odd couple they are, but it still makes sense at the same time.
Rayneydays chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
I. Absolutely. Adore. Isolated System. Truly incredible work. I like the second chapter too, but not quite as much, but that's just because I always prefer when Vegeta and Bulma are in a more stable situation. I like seeing a more playful side to Vegeta and I think you portrayed him perfectly without overdoing it, but you don't get that so much when the fic is set "in the three years." So I really appreciate the fics that I find not set in that time that are truly impeccable. They're not the easiest to find. I read this twice just today I love it so much. And I'm eagerly awaiting an update on your other story that's based on these. You have found a loyal fan in me. And OMG I just have to talk about the "stating the obvious" portion. AHHHH! It was so perfect! If there was ever a way for Vegeta to do it that would be it. :) I just simply can't praise you enough. Thank you for this wonderful piece of reading. Keep on keeping on. Rayne
Guest chapter 2 . 12/28/2013
Can you just make this a collection of one-shots about events that happened during the 3-year before the androids and 7-years before Buu and even beyond that? :D Haha. Just thought that your ideas are interesting and you portray them beautifully. :)
nishia.hall chapter 2 . 12/26/2013
very interesting indeed
sexysade chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
Excellent!
ShiftersFate chapter 2 . 6/2/2013
I LOVED YOUR WORK!
mart chapter 2 . 5/21/2013
Wow... This was amazing. You are amazing! This was one of the best, if not the best of all fanfictions I've ever read. Would you please consider adding chapter 3?
Enb chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
Wow! So entertaining! It was so much fun picturing Vegeta messing with Bulma in such a childish and sly way, it is so him! I enjoyed it! And the lemon part wasn't too nasty, which was good. Some people are tooooo vulgar with it. This was simply sexy
NinjaWhisper chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
Brilliant idea with the obvious reference of "we have a son". Very believable.
Ten chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
Awesome story.
wistfulmuse chapter 2 . 3/25/2013
Lol, gentleman Vegeta, not taking advantage of drunken, mostly naked Bulma...that was so endearing! No lemon necessary! Although there is NO shortage of B/V one shots, and standalones, there aren't nearly enough truly well written ones..thank you so much for these!
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