i can’t even continue to read this anymore. it’s just so...unorganized.

I'd just like to say I've read this story a couple of years ago, and remembered how much I loved it. So I decided to re-read it and loved it just as much. You're a very talented writer, not just in the technical sense, but the fact how you built characterisation and the plot itself. I did not expect most of the outcomes made! I absolutely hated how both Isaac and Becket died and changed as people, but what I hated most was when Frost and Black died. Black was like, babe and Frost was such a sweetheart! Congratulations on your part in successfully evoking that emotional response.

However, I just wished that in this story at least one person (besides Frost and Black of course) would stay freaking loyal to their partners! Everyone was like, cheating on everyone else haha. At least Amy redeemed herself. Then died. You're like the new Shakespeare with all your tragedies haha

Also, I'll say that it's not really a Shadamy story, but it was worth the read nethertheless. You got me hooked into these type of genre of reading and I can't wait to read your other stories!

-penelopethefox

Nope. Nope. Nope. Regret. Why is this ShadAmy?

Three Words: I. Hate. Echo.

Finally mustered up the courage to finish your book. I'm halfway there, and I gotta say... I'm glad I decided to continue reading. Glad Amy and Shadow are together now.

As much as I like to continue reading, I don't really like Amy's attitude here. I'm curious as to why this story even ended up with ShadAmy, but I'm gonna stop right here.

Well then

Amy is kinda mean isn't she?

Does anyone else realize that no matter how cute their interaction is she is ultimately cheating on sonic with shadow?

major sad day all around

ya um... that was, key word 'was' helllla funny until she basically got hit by a truck... dayum karmas a bitch ... yikes

this is the beginning of the funniest fuckign chapters ever ahahaa i love it and i love you ha sonic the crazy

this was an amazingly well done drama scene, pro scores! I was flipping shit till i recognized why amy went crazy for no reason! lol

Crazy twists so far.

WTF
I'm so confused right now, but still good job on the story. I've really enjoyed it