| Reviews for A Study In Contradictions |
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LilMissJenny chapter 21 . 4/14/2014 I don't know if you're finished with this story or not but I just wanted to say how perfect i think it is and i would love to read more of it and if the universe, J |
BloomingBlueMoon85 chapter 21 . 1/27/2014 Oh my god! All caught up and seriously blown away. This story is absolutely perfect. |
SpyAgent001 chapter 21 . 10/13/2013 Ah! This is great! Update! This fic has me going in both directions, but Will is just so great in this. And Zach and Grace are sweet too. I can't wait to see how this continues... L |
LadyJosephine24 chapter 21 . 7/29/2013 I loved that it was a long chapter :D It kept me busy for a while though I now feel terrible sad for having no more of your perfect Writing :-( I really can't wait for more :-( but back to the chapter... I freaky loved it all 5000 words were amazing:D loved it so much :D (also do i get a price for being all caught up finally ;-) ) JK. Anyway I really loved how Diane and Alicia talked and Diane asked Alicia to look into it. And i loved how you had Alicia handle it. I loved how you did with the lunch with her Cary/Kalinda it was incredible. I loved the things you had each of them say. How you pointed out how Will is with Cary and how it could work if they tried and how they are kinda similar... but it works against them...I loved you went there and i loved how you wrote it so you drew me in so much... hahaha you might really manage to make me ship Cary/Kalinda which is damn impressive and you should get some price for it. The price for best writing of the year, and making new shippers. I loved it so damn much... can you hurry up and write me some more :-P I loved the end too damn that was hot and cute and perfect end to a perfect chapter... and the finally lines had me gush so much:D Favorite lines:D "Kalinda gave her a strange look. She probably assumed that this was some kind of intervention to let the two of them finally talk. It wasn't the worst idea, per se. If she and Will had been forced in the same room together for a decent amount of time, they probably would have gotten to the point a lot sooner but it wasn't what the meeting was about." This is so damn true... and had me laugh out loud. "When will it ever be the right time? Have you ever heard of a firm that hasn't been born through a merger or a client-stealing of some sort? It's how the business works. I can't tell them that there will be a better time in the future because there won't be. Don't you think that I know that you two will be watching me like hawks from now on? I won't ever have the necessary time to build my firm, before one of you goes to Will to fess up." This is kinda true too... it is a hard buisness and one that works like that a lot of the time... ""What's with the cat-that-ate-the-canary grin?"" This was too freaky cute... and the end :D "Their insouciant laughers carried her to her elevator and she thanked her lucky star for there not being anyone else in the aisle. Even a stranger could have no difficulties understanding exactly how she and Will felt about each other even just from the way they laughed. Before entering the cabin, she used the only words that could express those feelings. "I love you Will. See you tomorrow." "Love you too, and can't wait."" this was just perfect! |
LadyJosephine24 chapter 20 . 7/26/2013 oh boy that was one intense chapter... wow... well they sure said a lot of things that i am sure they both needed to get out... wow... i am still in shock you actually went there with the punch i think... wow... i hadnt seen that coming to be fair... wow... well I love a good fight :D and it was kinda intense in the hot way... at least watching in with my inner eye ;-) great chapter as always :D |
LadyJosephine24 chapter 19 . 7/24/2013 Oh boy? seriously that end? damn okay more drama for sure now in next chapter... Okay i have to say first thought was cursing you with this chapter... after having made me laugh again withlast chapter you had me in tears again with the beginning of this chapter and the talk with the kids... that was not cool and so not fair... but damn it was perfectly written i loved it so much... it was so good:D and so sad and my heart were breaking more than once... i was however made to smile again with the AW chat that were just too cute for words... and hot to... thank you for that one to help my mood up again this time in same chapter... bravo for that :D and the end Oh boy that is all i have to say :D |
LadyJosephine24 chapter 18 . 7/24/2013 I loved that you had a fluffy chapter now i really really needed it to smile again and to stop crying like an total mess. the gradma thoughts were too freaky cute... and i loved the GT memory it was fun... really funny :D also i really loved that you had him teach Z/G how to cook it and made them promise to keep it a secret... it was really sweet how he told them about why he became a lawyer and i loved the story.. also interesting with the text i will look it up... will be interesting to see if it changes my view on Helena my self. And you had Owen show up... that was too damn funny :D was cuckling so much... also loved the end with Alicia coimg home and seeing how they had bonded :-) perfect chapter please give us more of these ;-) |
LadyJosephine24 chapter 17 . 7/24/2013 Oh boy... reading this chapter in very borring lesson of history was the worst decion ever as i am now bawling like a baby... like sorbing which is problematic in a foom full of people... anyway this chapter was amazing... it was perfect... all the things you had them say and admit that should have been said in the show... this was freaky wonderful fuck you did well on this and far better than i could ever do... might need to borrow your advice later on in against all odds cough... anyway this chapter is perfect and damn good and well written and fuck you did well with Peter... and how he probably could act in the situation... and Alicia she was so fitting... i loved this chapter... |
LadyJosephine24 chapter 16 . 7/24/2013 I loved this chapter too of course I did :D hahaha it was so freaky good :D so perfect:-) and amazing :D i really really loved the Laura run in damn that was intense... very intense... and i loved the things you had them say.. (also in mention i enjoyed the little Diane hint at first you had those were awesome and a great addition...) the second part of the chapter was just adoreable with the dinner talk and the kissing and the wii talk too cute for words and really had me smiling :-) I loved it :D |
LadyJosephine24 chapter 15 . 7/24/2013 I loved this chapter so much... loved the WIll/Kalinda interaction you had and the way you write Kalinda is amazing... i really can see Kalinda like that it is perfect... and i admire your ability to write Friendships as well as relationships... you are wonderful at that. something you showed just as well with your D/W confrontration... i loved the way you wrote it... and i really loved your writing Diane's pov any chance you would consider doing a whole story of it? hahaha i would love to see that :D anyway the AW you had in this chapter was just adoreable the text thing in the beginning... and their little flirty conversation in the next part :-) that was so amazing :D I truely loved it:D |
sleep is good-books are better chapter 21 . 7/16/2013 I love the Cary/Kalinda/Alicia dynamic! And I'm so glad that Will and Alicia are in love, makes me happy :) I'll be sure to check out The Name Game now :) awesome work! |
StrawberrySab chapter 21 . 7/12/2013 "You should understand more than any other. You built something in your life, Alicia. You built a family. And you fought like hell to preserve it from anything life has thrown at you. Will and Diane have built something. I've watched them eat, live and breathe Lockhart/Gardner. They have risked so many times of being expunged from Chicago law-scene and each time they have found the strength to save their creature. I want to do it too. I want the privilege of fighting for something I call mine." I loved this part the first time I read it, I love it even more now. And the end... I apologize in advance if you won't get anymore reviews from me but I'm dead and I'm not sure there's wifi in heaven. |
diane.chantilly chapter 1 . 7/11/2013 "Brilliant, interesting, captivating", ( (quote from your own ch. 6), emotionnel... writing ! (Big Cheshire cat grin) More, please ! |
Guest chapter 21 . 7/11/2013 oh my god the m rated section ! I'm all for more cary/kalinda if that's the Willicia we get haha ! WOW WOW WOW this chapter was amazing |
marysunshine81 chapter 21 . 7/10/2013 Here I am again, reviewing properly this time. I have to mention my favorite line again though, still laughing :D "don't hurt him or I'll trample you with my heels and throw your body in my future husband's farm" I really love that you decided to add this storyline and Alicia's thoughts on Cary were fascinating to read. You've given us a great insight into that relationship and into Cary's character. I LOVED the scene between the three of them, the dialogue was perfection, I enjoyed every line! And it's nice of you to reward your AW fans with the last scene :) Great chapter and you get bonus points from me for including Diane. 3 I can't wait to see Cary's decision! |