| Reviews for Fate's Broken dream |
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   Account Paused chapter 3 . 9/15/2006 yay, sequel please, sequal please. |
| emerald-maiden chapter 3 . 11/3/2004 *Tear, Tear* that was so sad. I love your work, ca n you pleaz r&r my new (and first) fic, its called a cloud broken in darkness first chapter is up. [jxm] keep up the great work im putting this story on my favs list. thanx and bye _ |
| Yamishadowcat22 chapter 3 . 9/3/2003 This story was sad but i loved it and can't wait to see a sequel to it if you write one |
| x Hearts chapter 3 . 8/14/2003 um...really neat. but hard to read, i think i need glasses now. . keep up the good work... |
| Zak yes she's a she chapter 3 . 8/13/2003 SEQUEL! PWEASE! |
| Fire Fairy7 chapter 3 . 5/15/2003 Realy great story I think you should do a sequel |
| Fire Fairy7 chapter 3 . 5/15/2003 Realy great story I think you should do a sequel |
| Wildfire's Flame chapter 3 . 5/6/2003 Smiles brightly. Yay yugi is all right. Okay I admit it, I am a sucker for stories where the good guy is like in mortal peril but then against the odds, they make it back safe and sound. Yes I would love a sequel. One suggestion though, things in the plot moved a bit fast in places. Try to slow it down some and give more of those heartwrenching turns you seem so fond of. I swear I thought I saw my stomach drop to the floor at the end of the second chapter. I was like Oh no, some evil dude is coming to take yugi away. . . Grins. Great work. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/2/2003 Grandpas english name is solimun I think I think Yugi should live I feel sorry for Yami Oh and DANI THAT IS TERRIBLELE BUTT FUNNY |
| Paleblossom chapter 3 . 3/25/2003 Burning: very good plz get the ep. up soon plz |
| YAMI CHIP chapter 3 . 3/5/2003 Chip: OH GOD! I'm turning into a fan of yaoi! Help!*starts running around yelling for someone to help her* Chad: We both like it, it's just that that yami-no-baka of mine over there swore she would never like yaoi. |
| Eldarwen chapter 3 . 2/9/2003 *wipes away tears* Aww. I loved the story. It was good but the beginning went kind of too fast. It was just BAM! But you really did have a good story *snif* Isn't Grandpa's name Soloman Moto? (I could be spelling it wrong though) Ther should have been more Tea bashing. *takes out her anime hammer* Next time can I push or wack her or something? *grins mischeviously* |
| Eldarwen chapter 3 . 2/9/2003 *wipes away tears* Aww. I loved the story. It was good but the beginning went kind of too fast. It was just BAM! But you really did have a good story *snif* Isn't Grandpa's name Soloman Moto? (I could be spelling it wrong though) Ther should have been more Tea bashing. *takes out her anime hammer* Next time can I push or wack her or something? *grins mischeviously* |
| Eldarwen chapter 3 . 2/9/2003 *wipes away tears* Aww. I loved the story. It was good but the beginning went kind of too fast. It was just BAM! But you really did have a good story *snif* Isn't Grandpa's name Soloman Moto? (I could be spelling it wrong though) Ther should have been more Tea bashing. *takes out her anime hammer* Next time can I push or wack her or something? *grins mischeviously* |
| Eldarwen chapter 3 . 2/9/2003 *wipes away tears* Aww. I loved the story. It was good but the beginning went kind of too fast. It was just BAM! But you really did have a good story *snif* Isn't Grandpa's name Soloman Moto? (I could be spelling it wrong though) Ther should have been more Tea bashing. *takes out her anime hammer* Next time can I push or wack her or something? *grins mischeviously* |
