Wow-what a story. Only a writer of your caliber could assemble a fanfiction as exciting a this. It also had its lighter moments talking about cheating as Kensi said whenever they made love, he would use his fingers to make sure she... And Sam still making his origami to kill time. Not many writers would remember that about Sam. This is a fanfiction I'll not soon forget. Thank you "el".

Outstanding! loved It!

Don't ever stop writing those oh so witty disclaimers! (I like your other stuff, too.)

I can't wait for your next (Revenge- as well as 'normal'-verse) tale! The show should hire you as a writer. Xx TLTIL

Great job on the case, partners, and individual character portrayal!

Fantastic story all around! Can't wait for next!

Absolutely brilliant fic, by an amazing author who always writes great fics constantly! Really enjoyed it! :-) MSB

The Nell uniform line made me lol. So perfect. Great case, great writing. Your character voices in your dialogue are especially well-done - Sam and Callen in particular.

Fantastic story, Thank you for sharing this with us.. Keep up the great work, and I will be waiting patiently for your next one..

Wonderful ending! I really enjoyed this! There was a part at the beginning that confused me; "He glanced over at Sam, hoping the big man had a plan for what to do next, and gasped." From this part to the section break. I wasn't sure who was talking where.

Well done!

haha the ending was nice just sad to see it end. this was a nice story and the play between Deeks and Kensi during the mission was pretty funny.

did I see a Die Hard reference in there or what ? :) great chapter, lot of action and I love the Densi banter.

Great chapter, love seeks crazy idea, that saved them! U hope kensi reacts fast enough! :D

Wonderful story! For some reason, I didn't read this when I first came across it, I saw a snippet of it on tumblr, though, and I'm so glad I read it! It's gotten to the exciting and nerve wracking part where the mystery is solved and I can't wait to see what happens!