| Reviews for The One That I Want |
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hermione the one and the only chapter 12 . 9/11/2017 I really loved the storyline, even though I think Danny should be more dominant than Kenickie... Hope you'll continue one day :) |
hermione the one and the only chapter 2 . 9/9/2017 Oh god! The end of the episode! Brilliant! |
hermione the one and the only chapter 1 . 9/9/2017 Loved your writing! |
Jeptwin chapter 10 . 10/28/2016 You British, then? I'm from the U.S., but changes between words doesn't really bother me. My mum grew up in Britain as a girl |
GoldStarBerry5 chapter 12 . 7/14/2016 OMG! I love this paring and have read this story about three times today! I love this story it is so well written and all the characters are spot on, I would want to write a Danny/Kenickie story but I know it wouldn't be nearly as good! Great work! |
Guest chapter 12 . 6/7/2015 Please continue this is so good |
River chapter 12 . 1/27/2015 I really enjoy this fanfic. I recently started it and I finished the last update. I really want to see this continued. Xoxo |
N.E.D.CL.1 chapter 12 . 12/12/2014 Please continue writing this story when you get the chance. I'm glad I wasn't the only one who thought these two would be great together. So please continue. |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/27/2014 Oh God, I needed this fic in my life. I always thought about love between two greasers and well-ah! here it is! I'm so excited to read the rest |
Hida chapter 9 . 6/15/2014 You just updated but forever do the update thing. *-* Youre so good at it and I love it so very much. Stop being so perfect and making these two so adorably perfect! -im lying keep up all the great work- |
Lux Hart chapter 1 . 2/19/2014 The world needs more Danny/Kenickie 3. Hoping to get up-to-date with this fic soon! |
Something Unpretty chapter 11 . 2/19/2014 And you didn't immediately come to me. I'm slightly insulted, here. Didn't I tell you I love to listen to people vent? Seriously. Also- Mom is too a word! You just don't like it's not what you usually say. Well, guess what- whenever I see words written by British people (as I'm assuming you are) like, say, 'arse' I just can't help but roll my eyes. To me, that is not a word, it's a way for people to swear without feeling guilty about it. Come on, can't you just say 'ass'? And I may be getting this wrong in pronunciation, but I don't really care. Oh, and look, the spell check I have installed to ALL LANGUAGES CONSIDERED says 'arse' is not a word registered. Do not insult the language I speak simply because it is different from yours. And that's coming from a fourteen year old. Basically, the insulted but still willing to listen person who is younger than you just told you off with perfect reason. And I know this seems off-putting (my offering to listen to your problems, then telling you off for your opinion on something), but I am insulted and in my mind you went a bit over the line and just judged something because it was different. I still would like to listen, because I enjoy helping people with problems (though they never really come to me with them) and you apparently need someone unbiased. |
Firesong chapter 9 . 2/16/2014 Thank you so much. I loved it. Please keep it going. This is probably my favorite paing right now. Thsnks again Firesong |
Something Unpretty chapter 9 . 2/9/2014 Yay! Danny's not spitting at Kenickie anymore! What's going to ruin their relationship and have them fix it now? Sorry I haven't been around in a while. I got distracted by hobbits and dwarves and dragons. I really don't think Danny was too in the wrong this time. I mean, what person wouldn't think their boyfriend/girlfriend was cheating on them or wanted someone else when they heard them mumbling in their sleep about them? Then, of course, Danny couldn't just let the boy SPEAK, my God. So, I don't think either of them has the right to tell the other off, when they don't really get the other's feelings. Maybe it would have been better for me if Kenickie's speech sounded more gentle. I mean, he gets his friend, understands him, so he should know that it was a misunderstanding and Danny didn't know, so probably should have been a bit more... quiet about it. Maybe if you have Danny just slap Kenickie next chapter, say, "That was for yelling at me." Nothing big, just one of those little tell-offs that don't mean much. I like how Sandy was though. She's amazing here. |
firesong chapter 8 . 2/8/2014 Please continue this, I love this pairing. I saw the cemestry in the movie and have been waiting for someone to write it You've done great so it going. Just fix the angst next chapter. Firesong |