Wait, what is it?

I just started reading this story shortly after the upload of chapter 18, and I absolutely adore it! The writing and plot work are incredible, and everyone seems very in-character unlike most fics. I'm excited to see what happens next, and I already have some working theories as of now.

Been a while since I read this. Just checking to see if it's been updated, which it sadly hasn't. In over a year. Take your time. I'm curious to see how you'll incorporate Star Allies into it, if at all. I remember bing reading it last year, sometimes acting out parts of it late at night when I couldn't sleep, much to the distain of my sister.

I'm an idiot.
Forgot to read your profile. Hope you can succeed in life.

See, you have a tv tropes page for this now.
It feels bad that, this appears to be abandoned. (Last updated a year ago) and you only appear to be active on deviant art now. I wish one day it'll get finished.

So it's kinda small right now, since I started at midnight and had to sleep, but guess which fanfic has a tv trOPES PAGE NOW AW YEAH

Now Thats one way to Break DDD.

Not really much to say. Nice long chapter, Magolor is being a beast, Marx is hilarious, I cried when Bandanna died, Marx is hilarious, the Dees are saving the day, Marx is hilari- Oh, wait, I already said that. And I'll celebrate national Bandanna day with the chapter. RIP Bandanna. You were always my favorite. :( Well, other than Marx. But can you blame me? He's hilarious! *cough* Um... Sorry for trying to make light out of the situation?

And yes, Mass Attack is the bane of my existence.

hey there. had a lot of stuff going on but was finally able to catch up
i love it love it love it and i cannnoooot wait for another update ;_;
i love this story so muchhhh
don't make me make a spongebob video :)

This has definitely got to be one of my favorite FanFictions! Everything is structured out so nicely! Can't wait for more!

Hey,it's me again,I'm the guest who told you I marked national Bandana Remembrance day on my calendar,and made you a Bandana Pixel art,or at least tried,but I love this story so much!it's amazing! It ties so much into the lore of the games,it has Marx in it,Drawcia,and soon even Paintra from Kirby:Triple Deluxe! Please keep writing the story when you can,I really want it to keep going!

See ya later!

I have marked December Ninth on my tablet calendar as National Bandana Remembrance Day,Rest in peace Bandana,I will always remember you.

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It's Bandana,so you can always remember him.

Woo! Only the first chapter, and you've won another favorite and follow! I can't wait to see what happens!

So I've seen this work around for a while now and finally decided to give it a go. And Holy Stars the beautiful agony that I missed! You are so so cruel to these people, but it's so well written. Truly amazing
So as I slam dunk this final chapter, I would like to say; thank you for writing this, good luck with the chores of life and good luck with writing the next chapter, my new friend

Going in I thought this story was finished (never have I been more wrong) and I figured reviewing might be kinda silly.

But this story is amazing. I mean, it is very detailed and makes sure the reader knows what's up, and also really draws out the emotions the characters feel and that really makes it more enjoyable. I won't deny that I've found myself crying and getting very angry on occasions because... It is really moving (and Marx's humor has me laughing while crying and that is conflicting on its own haha)

I also like the variety in the characterization (especially in this chapter - a very nice relief from the doom and gloom of the majority of the story, if I'm honest. I also adore Kirby 64 so seeing those characters brought to life is always a plus). It makes the characters feel more varied and real and I really enjoy it.

There are occasions of spelling errors (the ones I notice the most are 'Meat Knight' instead of 'Meta Knight'), but it honestly isn't too distracting.

All in all, I love this story and anticipate seeing more - I also hope things go well irl for you (making sure you are well irl is ALWAYS more important than updating a story). And thank you for writing such an interesting story!