Interesting plot

I just found your story, and it is truly great! Good job! :)

Go Irene. Like seriously, your writing is amazing.

:) ahhh so lovely..

Loved it! Glad they finally worked everything out lol awesome story! :)

Great story! Thank you for sharing it! :D

What a crap... It's so OOC it hurts. And their love life is as exciting as curling. He finally kisses her after all these years and she's giggling? And she's acting like it's not a big deal? They gonna fuck, but he's sleepy, so they sleep instead. What? WHAT!? I'm done.

THE FEELS! OH. MY. GAWD... THE FEEEEEEEEEELS

-shameless fangirling-

First off, let me tell you how wonderful this story is. I'm reading it for the second time now - it's that good.

Second, I noticed an error I didn't the first time around. It's not a huge error, not really. In fact, it was probably a mistake on the part of your word processor than you, and it was quite funny when I stumbled on it - brightened up my whole day when it made me laugh.

On the second paragraph:
"As he popped the medication into his mouth, he sat back on the sofa, knowing he would not be able to get up until the medication had kicked him. He listened in to the phone conversation Molly was having."
I think you meant "until the medication had kicked in."

Everyone makes little mistakes, regardless of how good they are as a writer - and you have to admit, of all the mistakes, that is one of the funniest.

Just letting you know,

UA

P.S. I really do love this story, whether or not I reviewed the first time around (sometimes I get too into a story to comment even though I know that's what fuels us authors best).

Very sweet story; I like them as a pair too!

whoooof my my that was fun!

This is sooooo, so good. Fantastic writing, and the characters are spot on. Beautiful work!

That was... whoosh. What an ending! Tender, hot, and sweet. A fantastic story, please write another soon!

AIEEEEE! He loves her! With such a funny, fluffy buildup! *melts*