This is really intriguing, shame its discontinued.

Jesus H bloody damn, this hits hard. I'm in.

Please update this! It is amazing! The flow is perfect and the story-telling is the closest to perfect I’ve ever seen in my life! It has been 6 years! (To be fair it is 5:10 am on New Year’s Day). It is gripping and I haven’t been able to stop reading since I started. I need to know what happened to Pinkie and Rainbow! You left it on a cliff hanger! Please update it! I hope that something hasn’t happened to you because your talents are so amazing and I would hate to know that they have been wasted. If you have lost motivation I am sorry and hope you can keep writing! :D

this reminds me way too much of The Cutie Re-Mark the part where King sombra took over the crystal empire. great work!

I kinda just stumbled upon this story, but you have blown me away with your writing skills. The flow is perfect, the pace, and the plot are balanced so well I really feel like I am Twilight going through this. Rarity's life seems very fitting based off her character I'm actually quite happy with what you have done with her. Fluttershy and Big Mac caught me off guard for sure along with Applejack! I truly love this story... hope you come back to it!

WRIITE

Hi! could you please continue the history? please!

omg please update or tell us what's going on and if you will end this sory D':

WAiT WHAT ITS BEEN TWO YEARS SINCE YOUVE UPDATED?!

I love it so far but pleeeeeeease hurry and do the next chapter xxx great work :-) :-)

Wow! Amazing story! I've never read one like it! But it's been a whole year!...No wait! It's been two! :D

You have to update!

PLEASE LET THE CHAPTER COME SOON!I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!:-)

I was hoping that Raritywould have an alicorn baby since there rare. But actually im glad she's only a Pegasus, it doesn't make it seem to good to be true or a coincidence.

So sweetie belle works at a club were drunk ponies could rape her at any time just because everything went out of wack after twilight s sudden disappearance, fluttershy and big Mac don't see applejack, applejack can die at any minute, goodness knows where pinkie is, and rainbowdash was arrested?This is is a pretty good fanfic So good that any brony would cry if includes myself.

You're not alone about the unicorns.