Reviews for The return of tobias hankel
KitKatLovesUT chapter 3 . 8/16/2018
Story is better than summary! Good story so far, though frequent spelling errors can be found.
Guest chapter 15 . 7/25/2018
This is so interesting
weirdofanness88 chapter 15 . 11/19/2017
I know you will get through this. You have amazing skills
Guest chapter 15 . 6/21/2017
I just want to say this story is so awesome! I think I've found it at the perfect time too because it seems you've been away a while and youre just coming back. I hope whatever stuggles you're going through have been resolved and you're in a better place emotionally mentally and physically.
kbf chapter 15 . 5/18/2017
I have only just started reading this story, so may I give you a word or two of advice. I noticed you refer to using Spellcheck. You really need to check spell check itself. It's resident gremlin uses any word that begins with the same letters, with very odd results, for example 'gestated' in Chapter One instead of 'gestured'. Both begin with the same four letters, but end with very different meanings.

In this announcement, do you mean you suffer from insomnia? Absolutely ghastly ailment.

What translation of the Bible are you using? It looks like the Authorised Version aka King James, actually my favourite. I find Ecclesiastes very hard going to study.

Barbara
ilovejared1234 chapter 14 . 2/9/2017
Are you going to write a sequel to the story
ilovejared089 chapter 14 . 1/10/2017
Is there going to be a sequel to the story comment me back
Guest chapter 14 . 7/20/2016
I like this. Please continue this.
haboosh.girl chapter 14 . 7/18/2016
it's the best story i ever read !
please update
haboosh.girl chapter 1 . 7/18/2016
it's amazing story !
Liltall chapter 14 . 5/9/2016
WHY HAVE YOU NOT FINISHED THIS I NEEEEEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS
Guest chapter 14 . 3/25/2016
Amazing writing! Too bad this fic seems abandoned... You still did an awesome job with it though. Very nice attention to detail and pacing.
Naru-chan-Lover chapter 14 . 2/16/2016
Update soon
ThatBigBlueBox chapter 14 . 2/8/2016
I love this story omg please update!
hannah skinner chapter 14 . 1/4/2016
Hiya, I am loving this story and was wondering if there could possibly be an update. I would love to know what happens. Many thanks. xoxo
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