I love how fluffy they are in this story! I love it all haha Thanks

What!? please don't stop here! it's a well-written fic. i'll be waiting for the next chapter take your time! It really is lovely!

Oh my golly gosh. This is too cute for words! Why couldn't the anime had more cute moments like this fanfiction? The characters are totally on point (or how I'd see them anyway) and I can't wait for the update!

nice chapter please update soon! :)

Please continue this! I'm absolutely hooked! I must know what happens next or else I'm pretty sure I'm going to die. Do you want that on your conscience? Of course not! Please update!

I love the story! I cant wait until the next chapter

u no in the last chap. Shion had brown hair.

It says that this hasn't been updated since January, is it still going? I need more of this beautiful fanfic!

I love you you put almost the exact quotes from the book into this chapter! I never would have thought anyone could pull that off but you totally did :)

This is so amazing I'm dying right now!

I'm sorry, I forgot to add something in my last review! There is also the inconstancy from the first chapter (and Shion's introductory chapter) in relation to the others. You originally described Shion's hair as brown, and you called Anne Ann. However in all chapters after Shion's intro, his hair is white, and Ann became Anne. Oh! And, this is nitpicking, but, I'm certain that schools do NOT get on to students who dye their hair UNLESS it is an unnatural color, because it is "distracting." Natural color is not included as far as I understand, unless, idk, she went to some religious school where dye is a sin or something.

I originally wasn't going to make a review seeing as this is a good few months old, but I keep getting really bothered. I enjoy the story line and characterizations, but the grammar is eating away at me! You use the wrong forms of to and your, you put commas in strange places, and you repeat words in paragraphs or sentences to the point of annoyance. Your descriptions are fairly good other than repetitive words.

You are a good story writer. You just need to work on grammar, syntax, and lexicon.

Wow. This book is like that fire to nezumi for me.

Oh my gosh! This had me on the edge of my seat the entire time! But alas, I read it too hastily and now I have nothing to entertain me in fifth period... Update soon!

please continue I really do love this story so very much