Reviews for Every Little Thing
TaxLady0415 chapter 16 . 9/14/2019
Seriously awesome chapter! Super-hero sister smacks pervert god - love it.
Guest chapter 73 . 8/28/2019
Kagome literally does not act like how she acted yesterday. She doesn't rant about honor and bullshit, seriously. I don't know who you are projecting into her, but she is not some kind of weird-ass stuck-up Ojousama.
Guest chapter 65 . 8/28/2019
Your view of Japanese is way too misinformed. Most young people decide their own match. And there is no way Kagome would break off her relationship because a father she'd known for less than a year disapproved.

I don't really know where you are getting your information from, but I feel like you have a rather anime-informed version of Japan.
Guest chapter 31 . 8/28/2019
Their betrayal has nothing to do with trust. If you see your husband trying to kill you, you'll think that he's trying to kill you as well. You don't just "trust" that he isn't. Kikyo-bashers are fucking retarded like this. They become jealous when their boyfriend talk to another girl, or think he might be cheating based on no evidence. However, they think that Kikyo should have trusted Inuyasha when she saw his killing her.
Guest chapter 30 . 8/28/2019
Demon, and half demon, please. Spirits could literally refer to Kami.
Guest chapter 27 . 8/28/2019
Oujou literally isn't a word. It's either "Ōjo", or Hime. Hime is used as "daughter of a noble family", while "Ōjo" is literally "princess" (king's daughter/King Woman).

Then there is Ojou, which means "Young lady" (usually of a rich family).

Basically, stay away from Japanese. Or you should have used Hime. Like seriously, you are calling her a princess. That's already kind of old-fashioned.
Guest chapter 16 . 8/28/2019
Please, for the love of God, don't try to use Japanese unless you absolutely need to. Just like how your pet peeve is how other people use the word "hentai" wrongly, mine is how fanfic authors use random Japanese words (mostly wrongly, as well).

Kagome would very likely not refer to Thor as "ECCHI KAMI". Kami is a term most often associated with the Shinto Gods, which, after Kagome's travel, Kagome would believe in. It would probably be extremely discomforting for her to refer to someone like Thor as a Kami, even if it is not wrong.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/28/2019
Arranged marriages are a terrible idea; it takes away the freedom of a person over who they share their life and body with.
LoveFanFictionForLife chapter 1 . 7/21/2019
Love it! Such an amazing story! Thank you for writing it! Will there be a sequel?
LaughUrHeartOut chapter 17 . 12/26/2018
oof a little too early for power-showings for my taste, but I'll read on
LaughUrHeartOut chapter 16 . 12/26/2018
Huh, nice touch.
I liked Thor getting tossed out the window.
LaughUrHeartOut chapter 14 . 12/26/2018
OOF YANKI BOYFRIENDS haHA
LaughUrHeartOut chapter 3 . 12/25/2018
lol, Tony you player
Salome Maranya chapter 7 . 10/9/2018
I'm curious about the language barrier. Or is this like in anime where this is not an issue?
DragonSpirit03 chapter 27 . 9/16/2018
Pepper knows Tony so well!
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