I know it’s been a while but I really hope you consider updating this soon! I’m so invested already!

Please consider coming back and updating this story! I’ve loved what you wrote so far for what seems like years and have always hoped you’d continue it

This is great! I'd love to read more... Do you think you might continue your writing at some point?

Kinda upset this only has two chapters but I understand the writing process and muses being lost to time. I really enjoyed it though.

A good start. Will you be doing a chapter every year-and-a-half?
Judy

Would love if you finish this

I know it’s been a long time, but I hope you one day come back and finish this. Your writing is beautiful, Wisp is one of my favorite stories, and I would love to see how this one continues.

Very good start... hope you’ll update one day and finish it. Love your writing, you are very talented.

interesting. wish you did continue this.

Yuck. Nothing like a teenaged whore! What is remotely desirable about writing about a little girl being a whore? I don't get it. It's bad enough that Edward is, w all the girls that have choked on his cock, but a child? No. Another whore to a one person relationship, story, bc they save each other. Blah, blah, blah. Romanticising fucking all sorts of people bc it will lead you to your true love. 423 d's in the v? Who cares?! Number 424 is the winner you'll change for! Just...gross.

I sure wish you would continue this story. U r my favorite writer. Your style is amazing. And thank god the xrated scenes u write r so different. If I hear one more "tongues fighting for dominance " or "your so tight Bella" I'll puke. I love your other story too ; Fairy Godfather. I've waited so long for an update. Anyway, just wanted to let u know how much I adored your writing. You also have wonderfully mapped out plots and characters.

Great story, and a great premise, but I just cannot get into the story. I don't mean to be negative, or to criticize, I am just stating my opinion. Although the story is well written, the character arc seems to be very misplaced. Any story with a slutty Bella, is not at all in her character, therefore is hard to be believable in the twilight genre. Having experience is one thing, but making her a mega slut is another which makes her almost unrecognizable as a character. Great story, horrible Bella.

I love it.

Oh please continue this story!? Pah-lease? I don't want to sound to needy, but it's so promising and we'll developed already. I will be crossing my fingers that you'll find your muse again with these characters. Xoxo

This is only the second ah story I've read( first is Bella swan- kidnapper). And you didn't finish it? Shame...