love this story!

Awwww. Amazing chapter

This was great, looking forward to the next update!

I like this story. I'm also wondering how Peeta will react when Katniss gets pregnant. Will he be upset that she didn't tell him the reasoning behind it? Will he question her love for him and if she really wants to be a mother/wife ect.

OMG amazing chapter

Amazing!

oh man Katniss is in deep...looking forward to the next chapter!

EVERLARK JUST MAKES ME WANT TO CURL UP ON THE FLOOR AND DRINK GALLONS OF HOT CHOCOLATE TBH

Also, virgins. [seventh grade boy voice] Huehueheuehuehuehe does this mean they have to do hte sex

heheheheh sweetcheeks ehheheheheh

also yeah u tell him sista u tell him! u go katniss for punchin gale!

Good chapter too. IT MAKES ME SO SAD THAT THEY AHVE TO SLEEP TOGETHER FOR COMFORT

peeta pie and his baking just makes me really emo tbh

Also just make sure you're not using too many adjectives/adverbs. Sometimes just say what you need to say and don't make it so flowery-you know what I mean? My critique is out of kindness btw :)

I'm sure this is going to be a great story but you're actually killing me with the before every paragraph. I'm not sure of it's purpose but it makes the entire thing read as disjointed blurbs.

Please update I love this story I need you to update, this story is so unique love to read more. Thanks so much.

It's certainly intriguing

I'm really enjoying this. Please continue :)

I am loving this story so far. Can't wait for more!