i need more to read on this~

You should really keep going, I like your idea, let's see what you can think next :3

Ohhhhhhh yes. No sleep for you Lucy. :3

Loved it!

Hahahha gorgeous!

It could work . i lik it

hihi das wahr ja was und dann das mir lucy gedanke und das sie nett schlafen kann und dann das mit dem baden und dann als sie dort an kommt und die kleider finden und dann das mit laxus und lucy gespräach und lucy gedanke hast du super gemacht mach schnell weider so schöne geschichte

hihi true what and then to me lucy thought and them nicely can sleep and then with him have a bath and then as them there in comes and the clothes find and then with laxus and lucy gespräach and lucy thought you have made really make fast weider so nice history

sorry if I have properly translated it nich there I German am

Ngl. This fic is one of the reasons I started shipping Laxus and Lucy, it was just so cute and perfect and something I could totally see happening in canon.

is there a possible way that this could continue? i loved where this was going /

All I have to say is ,sequel!

This is such a cute oneshot! And don't worry, I think you ended it just right because there's really not a lot you can add to it since Lucy is going to bathe in the spring... Can't let Laxus lurking around now, can we? (;

Gah! this was so cute! and aww i love awkwardness between people, its so funny :D this was perfect :D

Really adorable! 3 :D

You should seriously update! you should start the next chapter off with laxus having a dream about the spirit mage! or something just update your extremely good!

Mmm, you should continue this. It's a great story.