This is a very good book, I can not wait for the rest. So I have to say, Good job.

Dues Ex Machina Sword! Cause no story is complete without a crappy plot device.

I liked it I wish you would write more

Haha! no wonder herobrine's house is always made out of bedrock in every imitation/or real version
I see. What fun! I am pleased

wow...what a story. Only very few people out there can make a decent minecraft story. You are one of the very few people that has impressed me. Hehe im sort of like a story cretic.
This story ties all the loose ends in minecraft! I wouldn't be surprised if this wasn't the actual story of herobrine. Very good! Keep up the good work.

R u going to update yet?.?.?.:-( :'(

That was a good story. Now I know why herobrine. Want to kill steve

Thank you

The story gets more interesting and I like the twist. Keep writing!

I like the story and the chapter. It keeps the reader interested and it's original.

Why am I reading this? I'm an atheist...

Awesome Sauce!

Awesome sauce!

My friend brought me here.

Hi I like to write and have also hit writers block but got past it with brilliant ideas. May I suggest that a new character is introduced to the story?

P.S I love it!

Amazing story I can't wait for chapter 9.