I love this story! Amazing job. Such a sad backstory for Hudson, but it seems very appropriate to his character and explanatory for the way he is. This was a sweet moment in the film, when Newt called for Hudson, and I like how you tied it in with Hudson's story of feeling vulnerable as a child.

Nicely done and thank you for writing!

Heroes are not born, they are made in the fires of adversity.

This backstory for Hudson is awesome we know jack s**t about the marines of the sulaco, this is good.

The story is a bit dry but it is nicely written and smooth flowing.