The best one-shot ever. I love this

haha nice sentamental story, and nicer ending

Captain? Not bad. This was going to be interesting.

jajaja yes very interestinPP

I like your story, awesome job.

This is a nice one-shot. At least we can see how Zhou felt when Mulan left. Finally understood what he had driven her to do; sorta served him right. I'm pretty sure when he dropped the sword and crest, he was thinking, 'Forget the sword and crest; my daughter is back!'

And I agree with the matchmaker; I think she gave up on Mulan a bit too soon, and if I were Mulan's younger sister, I would have said, "Mulan doesn't need a stupid matchmaker to find her a husband; the only one who can find a man worthy of her is her!"

Anyway, this is a good one-shot. I'm impressed.