brilliant!~~~~

I am super upset this hadn't been updated in 4 years. It was so good.

This gas been an amazing story. The plot is original and I would love to read more. Too bad that the story seems to be dead, since it's not been updated for several years. I'll put it on my favourites nonetheless.
Thanks for sharing.

Omg. Is it (vengeful) Dumbledore's sister?!

Ugh, who is that strange blackmailer? i have some suspicions about Urahara (hm, but Yoruichi wouldn't like hurting Soi-Fon?), or god forbid, Isshin! There are also Fullbriingers (though we saw Ginjou), and who knows what else misfits!

..Oh man. Hinamori!

Ugh, creepy Ginjou! :C

Oh-oh-oh, I'd LOVE to see Ichigo's patronus! *_*

Hm, did Hinamori forget the theory that it could have been not really Dumbledore messing? Ofc, by now he probably knows anyway. I almost from the start thought that it was Snape on the orders of D, or Snape informing him after he dealed with Soi-Fon...

It's a great story and interesting Hinamori study :3 she's kinda like ...your average girl? just with shinigami flavour xD

And I really hope they wouldn't strongarm Ichigo to become a captain. Or at least would not succeed! Q_Q
Even though, it's nice to see Hinamori and Ichigo bonding, he. Bromance!

Wow, very interesting premise! *_* and original!

Also, at least Ichigo wasn't hang out to dry by himself for two years! thank kami :3c

Oh wow.. Such a sad story.. It's actually plain and too dark for a liking believe it or not. Seriously.. The humans actually going against shinigami? Please. It's a one sided battle. The spells the Wizards use are basically weak compared to the shinigami' sown kido spells. If your this much of an idiot you should just leave fanfiction. Readers are tired if not left fanfiction because of writers like you who take consideration into nothing for us readers. That being said just leave this story is more or less just stupid with the facts on how things work with bleach and Harry Potter were thrown out the window. Like a feather waiting to land into shit below. Literally shit. Can't deny it either you have to look at the positives and negatives of your own story if not I can't think of anyone else this autistic to do so. Well I'm on my merry way I'm sure things will be just fine as they are. Not really but who knows?

I really love this story can't wait for more.

Does this story love?

This has been loads of fun to read so far. Where's the rest of it?

so is this dead ? i hope not its really good

So is the whole Fullbring plan going to happen? Or was this the end of them? Personally I do look forward to the next chapter, even if mystery/conspiracy stories drive me nuts. I look forward to the next update. Though I do not like Ariana Ray that much; Lieutenant-General of the Avalon army with a soul blade with 2 unique abilities? Seems like kind of a mary-sue other than the fact she seems kind of nuts.

I'm kind of surprised that the Gotei 13 are so willing to trust Ariana after she disabled Soifon and rewrote her memories then attacked Rukia unprovoked. If anything they should have knocked her out and interrogated her, considering for all they know she could be lying and actually be part of the Coup to control Avalon.