Your not very good at naming things are you? Tonight? You knows Tony's shorthand for Anthony right? Amber would be better, Amber Starks. Not too terrible.

I really hope you continue this, I was looking forward to them watching Captain America. Please update soon!

I love this story and personally love the way you did a genderbent Tony Stark. I can’t wait to see either this one updated or the new one you have mentioned.

Yknow pepper Potts is a nickname that everyone just assumed was her name so I don’t get why if she was a guy it would be piper and not pepper

Sorry for correcting you, but I searched it up and Tony/Toni Stark's IQ is actually 270. 189 is genius but there are other people out there with that high of a score.

If I had Time to think of a solution I would have said it was to help we walk as it is difficult to walk and make things with a injured leg so was using that to help

Wrote the last review and Toni's missing the I in the name just pointing out I noticed it but couldn't change it. Also if not Clint/Toni why not Rhodey/Tony.

Will you be writing the new version of There's Always A Catch yet because I love the old version. How about even though in the movies Clint has a family make them his sister or sister in law and have him and Ton end up together.

Please update

Cringing a bit at the whole female Tony issue .
Makes me wonder how many pregnancies n abortions she’s had if she is the female version of super horndog Tony. As well as if he had to like cut off his chest like a cancer patient’s mastectomy due to the location of the arc reactor.

Hi! I was wondering if you could let me use your Iron Man 2 script (the italic paragraphs) for my story. I would give you the credit, of course, it's just the script parts. I'm not intending to take the plot too. Great story, by the way! :)

First off, sorry about the length of this, but I'm sure I'm not the first person to tell you these things, and I'm also sure I won't be the last. You, Karma, have a gift. I only discovered "*Blank* watches their movie" fics fairly recently, but I'm honestly in love with them. Sucks how harsh fanfiction (As well as some other writing sites) sometime are about these stories. But anyways, I just wanted to say a few things, offer a suggestion or two, and ask a quick question...

- Firstly, I applaud you. Not only is this in my top three (Very possibly #1) "*Blank* watches their movie" fic, but holy crap it's the for sure the longest. So props for that :D
- Now lets address the biggest part of your story. The fact that Tony Stark is now Antoinette (Toni) Stark. When it comes to gender-bending, there are only certain characters in each fandom that it really works for. Peter Parker, you bet. Steve Rogers, not so much. It just doesn't work in some peoples minds. Having said that, HOLY CRAP it awesome. Never before has female Tony Stark ever seriously crossed my mind. When I realized Tony was a chick in your fic, I was skeptical. But the length of your story along with the number of reviews convinced me to give it a shot. And I'm glad I did, because I'm totally on the Toni Stark team now.
- Having said that, I honestly wasn't a huge fan of how you also bent Pepper. I understand the reasoning for it. You were trying to keep the Toni/Piper romance even if they were the opposite gender. I'm glad that you're planning to change Piper back into Pepper in your rewrite and just make her and Toni close friends.
- Just know that these are just my opinions and I understand that YOU'RE the writer, not me. It goes without saying that I think your writing and plot/emotional progression are amazing, but I just wanted to suggest something...
- First is how you alienated Piper. I kinda got the feeling that while you started this story with the Toni/Piper romance, you kinda lost interest in it not to far in, so you had them break up before to long. On the other hand, maybe you planned that all along. Anyways, this point is moot now that you're planning to change Piper back into Pepper. As for the possible Bucky/Toni romance in the rewrite, that's something that will could work and be VERY interesting, especially during "Civil War".
- While I understand why you wrote it, having Natasha, Clint, and Phil all quit SHIELD after seeing Fury in the movies is just going to make future movies (Specifically any SHIELD plot point from "Winter Soldier" forward) REALLY hard to write, because you'll have to rewrite a large portion of the movies plots. The biggest problem is that you kinda vilified Fury. Clint, and especially Natasha and Phil KNOW what kind of person Nick is. He's not a kind or likeable man, but he IS a good one. So while they may not be huge fans of some of his decisions, I think they would understand enough of them to not hate his guts. I'm just suggesting not having Clint, Natasha, or Phil quit until "Winter Soldier". Not that they'd have much of choice by that point anyways.
- Next is how Toni acts. Now, you already said that you're going to make Toni more "Tony" in the rewrite, so that's good, because I agree with you. Throughout this fic, it feels as if Toni can do no real harm. You kinda fixed most of Tony's personality flaws when you made him into Toni. Now, I'm not saying you can't do that, but there's needs to be a balance. Take away one flaw, try to add another that still fits the character. The brilliance of Stan Lee's vision with Marvel is that he made his hero's human. They have character, dreams, but most importantly, flaws. Take that away, and you're severely stunting your character.
- My final suggestion is for when you reach "Civil War" in your rewrite. It's clear that you're Team Tony, and don't get me wrong, so am I... for the most part. While I agree that Tony was more in the write than Steve was, Iron Man wasn't completely blameless either. So when you get to "Civil War" try to write from a neutral standpoint, because when the author takes a side, you alienate the half of your audience the sides with Cap. If you do that, not only will you keep your full audience, it'll make your writing THAT much deeper.
- Now just a quick thought because I HAVE to say it...
- I CAN'T WAIT FOR PETER! Your version (Even your rewrite) version of Toni is going to be an AWESOME (read. adorable) mentor for Peter, even if she does the whole "let's try giving the kid some distance" method (As she should to make Homecoming work).
- The final thing I want to say is a question. I know you are rewriting this story, and I completely understand what a huge undertaking that is. But I'm just kinda wondering if you could give us an update on how far away we are from the rewrite being posted, even if it's just a ballpark?

Again, sorry for the length, but I wanted you to fully understand how much I love this story. It's not every fic that I leave a review this long, I only do that for the one's that deserve it. And you, Karma, have more than earned it. Please respond at your earliest convenience and keep up the amazing work...
...Archangel Writings

One question. Um... Why female Tony?

I've really enjoyed the story line! So many hardly follow through with these types of fics, but great job that you kept going!

Please do iron man 3.