Please update

continue please I'm intrigued on how it will wrap up!

Finish it

This is why I hate reviewing on my phone. Review for chapter one. The use of tense needs fixing. The premise of the story is good. It is just a shame you have not finished.

The use of tense needs fixed.

Hi I don't mind the chapt but I feel u gave Sakura n Naruto a free pass. Naruto is up to original character, supposedly dense! But I don't understand how he could hurt people n not know it. When he was treated with hurtful words n treatment when young. Sakura is just your fall guy but u did not elaborate further on her guilt. She said sorry, so it is o.k. u ddid anice touchh on Sasuke n Naruto outplay. I do enjoyed your story so thanks.

OMG, I REALLY LOVE POSESIVE NARUTO OVER HINATA... I LOOOOOOOOOOVEEEEEEEE IT!

Naruto and Hinata was close ok but wasn't the Naruto the one who say that he see her only as friend (first chapter ) and told sakura that he love her ...
I'm at chapter 31 now still can't understand some things. ..it was his fault so why the intrest now
Poor Hinata ...but I still don't like the thought of her do cold and distant. ...

I know I know I wait for the charper… but I hate write! It’s difficult! Whatever… I lot of things go well at last! Naruto is so cute! Be at home! A litller pervert… but specially Hinata! Ohmygod! I so surprise. I’m thinking… Naruto has a lot of chakra that means he is tireless!

Pd1. Oh, Choji is funny :3 in difficult’s situations?
Pd2. Do you love problems certainly… I want a Happy end D: and you brings more and more problems to Naruto and Hinata D: you hates me! (a message with love :3 really

I follow the story but I never sent you a review befort because is difficult for me to read so it’s worst when I try to write! I wait you can understand what I’m saying… any way, I love the fic, and I cant be without saying in this case because is the wedding! This remember me that NARUHINA IS CANNON! Yeah! Wel… Hinata looks beautiful! :’D and Naruto is a silly! Hello! She is well-disposed! And Naruto prefer to sleep… jaja I understand and in a estrange way is sweet :3
You destroy my dreams! What happen to Hiashi?

Why kill Tsunade?
Love the NaruHina sausyness though hehe

Maybe it was sai

Ooh, boy - Shikamaru had a clue and now he has squat. With Tsunade now dead and out of the way, it's up to Sai and Hinata to finally spill it. I wonder if Sai is going to be implicated in Tsunade's death, since he was at the house the whole time. Did they find him when the ANBU got to the house?

And by the way, gruesome death for Tsunade. Will the method of her demise cause Naruto to go into a rage? I wonder...

Boy, Naruto could call himself the new pervy-sage now, huh? He just can't keep his hands - or various other body parts - off of Hinata. Glad she's enjoying it, though. And she's just as much of a perv as he is. You go, girl!

We need a flash to Suna to see what the note was that Ino gave to Kankuro, and Hinata needs to say those three little words to Naruto. I'm thinking it would be nice if she said it when it wasn't in the heat of passion - might make them seem more meaningful. Perhaps when she tells him she's...pregnant? Hint hint?

Can't wait for the next chapter! I'm so engaged in this story!

Awesome chapter!

That's going to lead to some questions. Well done chapter.