It has truly been a long time. I actually went back to the first story and reread all the way up to this new chapter of this 2nd story. It took some time but I enjoyed every chapter. Hope to see this finished soon and see what Naruto's next journey will lead to. Akira seems to always have alternative methods but still looking forward to his downfall.

Glad to have you guys back. Until next time.

Is Akira going to suffer a similar case to Wesker with his Bioweapon cause that would be poetic for him.

Well, getting closer to the original story.

Too bad you can't throw in a few chapters showing Konoha falling apart after Naruto's banishment. Especially if there are those on the council who are too stubborn to admit that they had a hand in destroying their own city.

I see you're going to rewrite Mizukage. Here's an idea, finish this story. Your track record with rewrites, sorry it sucks! Eight years to reach the Sasuke Retrieval for Family of Foxes and Snakes and six years for the search for Tsunada, The Losers rewrite, twenty months for tree chapters of the Double D Rewrite when it took six years to write thirty chapters for the original.
Personally I vote to finish this story, it's the only one you can put your own spin on and the best thing is you can be creative. Who says it has to follow canon, throw that out'

The first thing I have to say is that I liked it. Much of the first part of the story. Ascend to power. and its continuation, travel through the fog laverdad. They both liked me. And a suggestion.
about if you plan romance between naruto and a girl and
Naruto I must be a girl other than Konoha, maybe Yayoi or Yugito, or some other. Girl, not from Konoha.
and if he has a friend with someone from Konoha who is alone, with Jiraiya and Tsunade, and the haruno rots. and the uchiha really hope they start.
to upload more chapters, greetings

UPDATE please

please next

More please! I must read this to the end! This has quickly become one of my favorite stories

The more I read, the more I love this story but I am aware that i am closing in on the last recorded chapters

Great chapter! The pacing, fighting, and descriptions are wonderful.

The buildup is nice. I hope you come back to this fic.

You two are good story tellers

I really like this series! If I’m not mistaken you are the original creator of Mizukage right? I was wondering if you could point me to somebody who finished posting all of the chapters that you originally created?

I really hope you plan to continue this story. I really, really enjoyed it so far! :)

I can tell that this story is beginning to come to a close. It has been great so far! I really praise you and Toa Naruto for your beautiful work. You made the characters amazingly believable. I hope you update with the finishing chapter/s soon! Thanks for your great work.