I knew it! Creep was Raven. Oh yeah, called it. Maybe Jinx should take the kids to Gotham. Batman is Robin's dad. XD
Oh my goodness! I just found this story and I am absolutely in love. I really do hope you decide to continue this fic because you left off with a cliffhanger and I really really really want to know what happens next!

The song I sing is one of misery
It is rare to find such a beautiful gem of a read
Yet like addiction the yearn for more is strong
And left without it's desire the need becomes a song
One that cries for it's own Sanity's sake
The voice can be heard now saying "Please Update"

OH my update soon. I fucking love this story. I never once lost interest! I need more!

Oh heck yes she is back!

I meant how is raven still alive. Stupid auto-correct.

How us travel still alive! That is so weird.

WTF?! Three guesses:
Slade somehow mind controlled Raven
Raven died and her body is being controlled by part of her that isn't really her
Raven died and something took over her body

**** HIGH on THE happy SIDE ****

So, 2 updates in a week ? Someone suddenly has a lot of time on her hands, uh ? Good, good.

It's not without a bitter frown that i noticed that K-K-K-Kaarlinaa is back in reviewing, making the usual parrot : "continue... continue... continue... continue... continue... continue... continue..."
Damn, i thought that chick had given up reading this because oh-crap-i-want-Raven-but-Angerflare-won't-bring-her-back-i'm-pissed-i-stop-reading-this ! Yet no, the useless reviewer is still there, still reading... and still reviewing ! Jeez ! But since she managed to put sth relatively interesting this time (aside from her worn out "continue"), i'll be merciful and not lash out at her.

Ladies & Gentlemen, ya had guessed it all, ya had foreseen it, ya knew it : Creep is Raven, Raven is Creep. Mystery ? Bah, no that much anymore, especially courtesy of the chappy where all hell broke loose (again, what an adrenaline rush that was !) : several decisive hints were given there, but the unveiling of the mystery had started even B4...

But while she still knows who Raven is, given her 3 final words, she obviously doesn't identify herself as Raven anymore. Like had she become someone else. My guess would be that, after
the ocean crash, she might have been rescued by a Slade squad and brought to the base, and EITHER she already has lost her momory at that time, and then Slade just had to convince her to join his armed forces, OR it's Slade who had her brainwashed while she were unconscious, and after she woke up unaware of her own identity, he did the same as described before (convince her...).

There still is something bizarre regarding that memory loss. I assume that Raven should have been in that oblivious condition for a long, long time, actually since she "became" Creep. But if that is so (and logic would have it that way), then she certainly wouldn't remember a thing since then. And if she doesn't remember anything, how can you explain her whispering "Did you miss me ?" to Jinx ?
Because such utterance would suggest she DOES recall Jinx and their being together wz the kids, earlier in the adventure.

And how did Raven find out everything about Jinx, her real name Lorraine, aso. ? Thanks to input from Slade's villain archive ?

It also mysterious how Rae/Creep fell into the sand, prior to losing her mask, but i guess that increases the aura of mystery. :)

I really really enjoyed the desert part, which was great, and dug the cliffhanger a lot. Very clever from ya.

But if i'm enthusiastic about the content, and clap wz both hands at it, i'm still dissatisfied at the form itself, in the last part only (the desert part). More accurately, at your choice of words to express a few things. Here :

- "the air ... blazing ANGRILY" (you'd use that for humans, not objects or climatic phenomena)
- "the sun was UNRELENTLESS" (i found "relentless" on Word Reference, not "unrelentless" !?)
- "her body THUMPING" ("thumping" doesn't fit in this context, given its meaning (to wallop, hit)...)
- "it's jaw CLOMPING" (also doesn't fit, meaning-wise : "thomp" : walk in a heavy way (to lollop)...)
- "A ball of hot gas BELLOWED" (also improper meaning : "bellow" is used for humans / animals)
- "the open wound was ... SCREAMING" (although, metaphorically speaking, it could work...)
- "the torn cloth ... CRESTFALLEN" (that word is used for humans only, as being a psychological one)

There also are, still in that last part, several repetitions close to each other, especially for verbs (like in neighbouring sentences : "barely ...barely", "stirring...stirred", "scrambling... scrambling"
"crawling... crawled... crawled", "shining... shining")

I don't wanna nitpick or anything, but this really drew my attention and partly annoyed me. I never made that many remarks about your style in previous reviews, becasue i hadn't spoteed that many stuff to pay attention to... and that's why i'm all the more displeased with your glossary in that last part of the chapter.

I regret it especially given the fact that i found this part thrilling and breathtaking. But the form IMO wasn't as good as the content. You're a great writer, with indubitable narrative skills, and brilliant ideas, so i feel kind of sorry to have to make these remarks. I wish i was as imaginative and gifted as you, in all sincerity. But yeah, if i'm to review, i have to speak open-heartedly, even at the risk of displeasing the author : i could never be hypocritical. So basically, sorry if i "hit a nerve" wz my language criticism, but if you take the time to reflect on / analyze it, you may find that i may not be that wrong after all...

Yet again, i want to wholeheartedly thank you for the two fast updates AND the final revelation of Creep's identity AND the very efficient cliffhanger at the end of this chapter. I'm still wanting for more, and am looking forward to your next update. Bravo, bravo and bravo for this superawesomefantasticwonderfulsmashingbrilliant story, which are up there among my top fav's !

Oh, and one last question : why that title MONSTERS FROM AMNESIA ? There is a monster, there is amnesia, true, but... why the word "FROM" between the two ? What the link between them ?

Tremendous gratitude for your hard work, which i'm sure will be better glossary-wise in next chapter, and wish ya a great day !

Bestov & takkare !

::::::: Léo :::::::

And finally it is confirmed! Raven is Creep! But she doesn't know it.

I really appreciate the way you went about this. The purple eyes gave away that Creep was Raven, but you took your time revealing it, and I had been wondering why. The reason was because Raven herself didn't know!

A quick inquiry I have about this; I know at first it was supposed to have some BB/Rae in this, but has it changed? I know that since Raven has been gone for a while there haven't been many opportunities, but I'm just wondering if that's still the case.

Ah, the truth is revealed! I'm assuming she has amnesia, which would explain why she says Raven is dead. Or did Slade use mind control on her and make her forget?! You did a great job on this chapter, I really liked the monster and how you did the reveal of Creep's real identity, truly fantastic and you updated super fast, which is appreciated. I can't wait to see what the next chapter holds and how they all react to this news!
With thanks,
The book thief

awh memory loss, that very interesting. puts this in a different level. continue

Holy crap. That was exciting. I kind of figured that it was Raven but, yeesh, I had never expected it to be revealed like this. This chapter was beyond words.

*gassssssppppp*
You. Posted. A. ...HALLELUJAH!
I'm so in love with this fic, it's probably unhealthy... I mean the maintenance the shrine takes is ridiculous!

Purple eyes? Too easy. I'm 80% sure Creep is Raven and your just trying to keep us guessing buuuutttt...

Could Creep be Raven in another body? Like, Raven changed into another form in order to rescue the Titans and Jinx without having to wait for her body to heal or something? Grasping at straws here...*groans in frustration*

Yeah, it has been a long time but, better late then never!

Hey, at least you updated! I know stories I have been waiting for updates since 2012! Great chapter, picks up right were it left off from, and we all know that Creep is Raven, why don't you just make it official? I can't wait for the next chapter, so I can continue reviewing this amazing story!
With thanks,
The book thief

I am so happy you updated this. I love this story more than anything and I can't wait to see what else you can do.