Reviews for Raise Up The Sheets
wickedinkwell chapter 1 . 8/13
Ugh, so well written apart from the fact that the character's have retained their personalities in this perfectly. I love how you wrote the "unwrapping a present" part!
hgdutdut chapter 1 . 7/29/2019
thanks ;)
Darkmaster of the arts chapter 1 . 1/28/2019
Seriously good. So well written, and the erotic elements and character reflection flowed together so well
ZZZZZZzzzzzzz chapter 1 . 5/7/2018
I love how you mixed a love story complete with all the good layers of infatuation and desire with a lemon.
aacox chapter 1 . 9/27/2017
I loved it! It was sweet, and erotic at the same time.
enj412 chapter 1 . 5/17/2017
I have read this numerous times and each time I am amazed. Your writing is incredible. You get FourTris better than anyone. This story has the best smut ever. I sure miss your writing.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/8/2017
More!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2017
That was wonderful but it could use some help for Instance
You could add in a kid
Or you might have a second chapter
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2017
Pretty good keep it up
pinkqueen1977 chapter 1 . 2/21/2017
OMG... Wowza! Loved it!
SMC chapter 1 . 1/3/2017
i don't know if i've commented before but whatever. anyway i've read this like a million times and honestly, this is the most accurate representation of their relationship i've read yet. wow. amazing job!
cyan3o1 chapter 1 . 10/26/2016
Wow! I have to say that your writing is truly amazing. I like the way you word your sentences and keep your characters in character, since that's usually something you don't find in many fanfics. I'm a writer as well, and though I don't publish my stories I understand how those things can be a little hard sometimes. I really like your work, and I hope you keep writing stories!
SMC chapter 1 . 10/25/2016
ahhhhhhhhhh i love this !
Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2016
Nice!,!he ️Ed her gooooood.I WANT to have it with him!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/20/2016
I feel as if this would fit into the books, well done
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