Amazing!~

moooooooooooore!

So you went on holiday, and never returned to writing. I hope you are okay. And that one day you might return to this story. You set up a big mystery with Alice, and we never got any answers about her. Plus, your series was nice because you took the time to change dialogue enough that it didn't feel like reading scripts with a new character sloppily added in. Alice had a personality and her story is pretty original. Great series, I hope to read more someday.

Honestly, this story is just like the show, in my opinion. Except it has better writing, a better character an is just generally awesome! Please keep updating This book, because I finish it then go back to thie other one (not that I'm complaining, I could read your books all day!). Awesome work and I wrote too much, didn't I? Oh well, bye! :) :D XD :3

I wonder when or if the doctor is going to tell his name to Alice and when river comes in it will she be jealous of Alice I hope so. Please update soon.

Dear PenSmith433, I love your story and I think that it's wonderful. I hope and wish that you would continue to write the story because I really want to find out what happens to Mary Anne, Rose, and The Doctor. Will Mary Anne be trapped in the parallel world, will Rose, or will both Rose and Mary Anne Be trapped? Is Mary Anne like Jack, where she can't die? Will Mary Anne and The Doctor be together for ever? So many questions and theories that have come up while reading this story of Mary Anne. I hope to hear from you soon.

Are u going to do this story were the doctor is the 11th and Alice is in it as well.

Great chapter! With Alice being brought back to life and having the heart of the tardis in her head will she live long without turning like Jack like looking like the face of boa I hope so. Plz update soon.

Hello. I'm a big fan of what you've been writing and i also find it fascinating. I find Mary Anne to be a very interesting character. I hope you finish this story. And if you do decide to do season three, I hope Mary Anne stays with the Doctor. I find the story much more interesting, because Rose has a sister and Rose didn't fal in love with the Doctor. Even though Rose and the Doctor were cute, I think that Mary Anne and the Doctor are cuter. I wish you the best of luck on any story you're working on.

Thank you so much for writing this story. It is very well written, the romance is good (although there could be a bit more of that *hint* *hint* ;) ), the plot is very exciting and still very very thrilling although we already know what happens most of the time due to the tv show. And I really have to give you a virtual cookie for using the first person pov - there is nothing I hate more than jumping from one person's head to the next.

Oh and thank you for the scene where he finally tells her that it's his name on the fob watch :D Loved that he whispered it into her ear - goose bumps. Very special moment!

Question: If you are as intelligent as Alice, why not simply go into the TARDIS library and read up on Gallifrey and the doctor? She is clearly interested and confused about his culture, the fob watch and what exactly makes him a Time Lord.

I like it! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Great chapter as usual! Wonder how long it will take now for Mary Anne to ask the Doctor for help with her nightmares. Loved Capaldi's first episode, I quickly accepted him as the Doctor to me as well, cannot wait to see more of his personality in the next episode. Hope you have a good holiday. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Awesome chapter! I loved the premiere of Series 8! It was Brilliant!

I loved it. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Great chapter!