This was an awesome story! I can’t wait for the sequel! When Sports master was talking about their secrets, what did he mean he knew who Dick’s parents were?

MY LITTLE JAYBIRD!

My grandmother has 30 brothers and sister so I think 12 sisters and 17 brothers isn't that bad, also I liked that you mentioned P.R. not a lot of people know what a great place it is

Well that was a ride ill fully admit i wasnt the biggest fan of this fic but i did enjoy it
finally decide on a nams for my star trek online starship cause if this thank you read you later

i really would love a roy and jade sequel to this story. hopefully you come around to it someday

that was clever. with the room being their zeta-tube announcing thing. that was awesome XD

please keep writing your so good

Wonderful story! 3

YES THANK YOU FOR AVOIDING THE SOFT WATER FALLACY

As you know, when you fall into water from above a certain height, it has exactly the same effect as falling onto cement. Hollywood gets this wrong; ergo, everyone gets this wrong. Thank you so, so, SO much for getting it right! I felt like fist pumping :D

I wanna cry now and I don't know why...

damn. you just had to put in that last sentence didn't you? that was really good chapter. damn.

I am one more chapter like that away from crying right now. ugh I really shouldn't be listening to sad country music while I read this story.

damn it! ugh I hate it when sportsmaster does crap like that

my gosh please tell me she didn't tell him

OOOH! are you gonna put a bit of jade/roy in here?