Reviews for Red Roses & White Wings
Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 2 . 11/21/2018
huh. interesting.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/18/2017
THIS IS BRILLIANT, you have to continuing it, it's so unique and well written with a great plot. I know you've probably already forgotten about it, but please at least consider continuing this, you're a great writer.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/5/2017
Please continue and update. This is so interesting! :) I want to know if the Host Club is going to discover Dark and if Emiko is going to force Daisuke to steal arts from Ouran Highschool as it is a rich sch. :)
Rose chapter 2 . 2/26/2016
I love it
Phatpanda55 chapter 2 . 12/10/2015
Please update soon.
Kimmiko T chapter 2 . 12/5/2015
I really love this story!
Please update when you can!
Thanx!
Guest chapter 2 . 9/15/2015
Keep going
Guest chapter 2 . 9/14/2015
Like it
Guest chapter 2 . 8/3/2015
Please make the next chapter
CloudCarnivore chapter 2 . 5/29/2015
Please continue soon~! This is amazing~! :D It's been a few years..
SerinasHarmony chapter 2 . 2/17/2015
i LOVED it! it was so freaking AWESOME and haha Dark, but man, why r the twins being so mean to Dai those big meanies! im gonna go stomp on them! Anyways, UPDATE SOOON! *walks coughcoughstompscoughcough away into a portal*
Guest chapter 2 . 2/4/2015
Omg please finish awesome story :D :)
Guest chapter 2 . 1/27/2015
I thoroughly enjoyed that. I like how Daisuke has private arguments with Dark. I can imagine a later point in the story where he starts to enjoy the club and a somewhat ordinary high school life, insert criticism from Dark, Daisuke loses his cool and yells "Well me I never wanted to be a host in the first place!" Of course in that moment he'd mean being Dark's host, but nobody else would know that. Insert much misunderstanding.

As far as his secret goes, I foresee suspicion arising from Kyoya during one of their "espionage" stalking scenarios because he's way too good at it and ends up being the only one not caught by anyone at all.

Maybe the classic security alarm scene, just vastly altered. Instead of trying to get in somewhere it's a new system that won't stop blaring, while the trio of idiots is freaking out and making it worse. To top it off Daisuke has a killer headache, so without thinking, he walks over and disables it in ten short seconds.

I'd love to see his reaction to the Haninozuka's fighting. And his arm definitely needs to be treated after ignoring it in order to spend the whole day painting. Maybe one of the Otori family hospitals. Which brought up the idea that if Daisuke/Dark ended up stealing from Kyoya, he'd face down the entire private police force. Success would put Kyoya in one of his sinister foul moods.

If the club where to ever meet Riku, I could see a meddlesome scheme to "move the relationship along" something goes horribly wrong, and maybe he transforms into Dark right then and there. That's all in the way of ideas for now.

As far as things I don't like, it would possibly be the art scholarship I'm general. But that's probably because I've read way too many crossovers where someone gets an athletic scholarship or something. But they never provide any depth into why the scholarship was offered in the first place. Academic is obvious enough, Ouran Academy definitely shapes an education for the better molding a promising young mind into something great. Plus it looks good on college applications. Also, they almost always forget that there are rules and conditions. For example, Haruhi has to stay at the top of her class. Also, unless someone very important happened to visit the amateur art show, it's unlikely that would be enough for them to have even heard of him, let alone seek him out.

Lastly, where is he living? I'm fairly certain Ouran has no dorms, and you made it quite obvious that it's a fair distance away.

PS The broken up writing style felt wasted at the end of the first chapter, if bothering to put a not instantly revealed pause like that, it might be better to put more substance in between or at least put it in the next chapter instead. Sorry for the super long review.
Keisomie4700 chapter 2 . 6/20/2014
This is amazing I enjoyed reading it!
BelovedBoy chapter 2 . 6/14/2014
Please update soon this is an amazing story and I need more please!
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