Speechless.. Really .. You said at the end you argued with Lucy in your mind well I dont find anything missing.. And the good part, you brought Natsu's characterisation spot on.. Goofy yet mature... Cried two times already.. Very very very beatifully written yaar... Waiting for more... Nalu

In your face Sting. Just i can't stand this guy.

I feel a little offensive. You make Lisanna and Natsu to meet in Greece and, while Greece is a beautiful country (i know because i am from there) i feel offended because Natsu and Lucy get separated with a small blame was because of Greece. I don't like it one bit.

You could use "marks" to separate actions.

AWWWW this was so good! And i love that Sting found his cat at the end! Great story

Aww such a good story u should so make "flashback" story of their teenage summer romance

I froze, my heart felt like it was going to explode, and all that laughing was driving me insane, so all I have to say, is that, I love your writing, stories, and your awesome authorness!

I'd expect her to be pregnant cause he probably got excited ;-). Lol

I like It! At the moment I feel a little on touch with Lucy in this story because right now I have a major epidemic of writer's block on my hand. and I swear, it literally hurt when I hit the mental concrete wall in my head.

I really liked the story.

IT IS AWESOOOOOME!but I feel so sorry for Sting! sob*

This was really good! Don't worry, I argue with characters too...

Sooooooooooooooooo GOOD !

soooh cuteeee

Loved it

That was great!
I loved it! :)

So sweet! non