This is just ridiculously charming and original. I've read many Naruhina fics and I've never run across one that has a semblance to this one. It kills me to see it isn't finished, even when you had the outline made and put the promise of a lifetime of finishing it at the ending of chapter 1. One can always hope, though.

I want to know what happens.

I want to watch him fall for her.

That's all.

I'm laughing WAYYY to hard my dad is starting to look at me

If you don't update soon you'll be disappointing a large amount of people. You don't want to disappoint your readers... do you? Some of them may stop reading your fics if you update to slowly so I suggest you update fast cause THE SUSPENCE IS KILLING ME!

This is so awesomeeee can't wait for the next update!

argghhh i love this fanfic so sooo much
so original, funny, fucking cuteee , IC! so FUCKING CUTE asdfgh
but but then i tried to click to the next button and i didn't find it and then i looked on the updated date and then then.. :'( you can't give me a taste of a nh cake and then disappeared like that
you're so cruel but so awesome gurl :'O

I just dunno what to say...

... except that this fic BLEW my mind.

Please, please please write more! This is so awesome and I can't wait till you write so please write soon!

I liked it!

...Wow.
I originally came here off of the search engine expecting to find a scene of "D'awww", but you have gone far beyond that. You have gotten me intrigued, and for that you have my respect, my review, and my follow.
Looking forward to reading more.
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Just re-read this for the-

ER. I don't remember how MANY times I've read this again but it is A LOT.

/giggles like a gurl

This is just awesome, easily one of the best fanfics I've seen.

I don't understand how you do it.

How do you come up with all these scenes? These scenes that are so original that I've never EVER seen in ANY fic. How do you make them so sad, and yet so happily beautiful at the same time? I keep trying to stop the flow, but they keep flowing without stop. And how do you evoke such feelings from the reader with just words?

Magic. It's the only thing I can think of.

; )

This fic. Is amazing.

Admittedly, there are quite a number of spelling mistakes and the punctuation could be fixed.

But this idea is something I have NEVER ever seen in a post-Hinata-confession fic like this. It's so damn unique that I had to keep pausing to be able to take it all in.

I think you've got a wonderful idea which you've developed into something beautiful, despite the flaws.

But always remember, flaws can be fixed.

I wish you luck and am eager to continue reading this. : ) I truly hope you decide to continue and finish this fic.

Kind regards and warm wishes,
ArYa

Wow...I just spent like an hour looking for a good story to read and I think I might have just found a diamond in the rough. Seriously, this is the best story I've found in this little search session so far as pretty much everything is spot-on. The characters are believable, the dialogue is interesting and, most importantly, grammar and sentence structure are excellent. I'm really hoping that you plan on continuing this because it's got some serious potential!