| Reviews for One Last Time |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 7/14 Nice |
 mystified111 chapter 1 . 1/25/2019 this story is very hot and eroctic..though misty appears quite OOC in my opinion,especially when she was quite rude to pikachu,I mean she absolutely loves the little rodent,and would never use the term "rat" for him,just saying!..good attempt though! |
| cake0108 chapter 1 . 4/27/2016 Awwww loved it |
| Feta Tsukino chapter 1 . 12/24/2015 Ash and Misty are the best together. I like the way you wrote this. Its so hot! |
| Nami chapter 1 . 12/6/2015 Wow, great one-shot! I really loved it. You should continue, seriously. |
| preeti chapter 1 . 10/10/2013 you are awwweeeesssooommmeeee at lemons |
| River WolfGirl chapter 1 . 10/4/2013 I liked it! And don't worry, you aint' exactly alone ;) |
| preeti chapter 1 . 8/2/2013 Awesome story its kinda OOC but twas awesome ! |
| preeti chapter 1 . 6/12/2013 best one ive eva red! |
| preeti chapter 1 . 5/24/2013 awesome! luv it :D |
| Preeti chapter 1 . 5/23/2013 AWESOME ! |
| preeti chapter 1 . 5/22/2013 I LOVE IT! |
| New Divides chapter 1 . 4/19/2013 Nice |
| abby pond chapter 1 . 3/10/2013 But gary has all those girls in bicinnies following him any way this whas great And ash has somthing he can use against gary! |
| reppad98 chapter 1 . 2/27/2013 That's definitely different than what you usually write and than what I usually read, haha. But I like the details, like Gary being gay and Pikachu actually being in the story, haha. Thanks for writing. |
