I absolutely loved the story.

Ok I just gotta day this, you may want to consider editing a bit because it is very hard to get past all the ! Marks at the end of everything they say. It’s like they are yelling all the time or are overly excited every time they speak. Nobody talks like that. Other than that it is a very good story so far, I just want to let you know what may have some people struggling to read it.

Love it great story

Loved it!

I know that was a short review but just. damn.

this was so freaking great.

So Glorias 's bar has been around since at least the twenties how is Gloria not having explained I wonder.
Rebekah will be mated with Seth and I'll with leah.
Klaus should have burned fairy boy months ago.
Losing only has one oh in it.
He will get run out of Mystic Falls because he is an idiot .

I gather there won't be any trouble from Aro and crew over Charlie knowing everything.
Will they still have trouble from fairy boy and Mystic Msg once they get back to forms I wonder?
Besides investing money how did they accumulate their fortunes over the centuries,did they kill rich noble men back in the day and grab their loot?

Thick.
I don't know why the whole family just didn't work together to take down daddy instead of keep running from him.
I don't understand why since you have been told what the proper spelling is you keep misspelling those words.
I don't know what the back story is but why has Finn been daggered for almost a thousand years?
I know it is too late but I am hoping that if she does get pregnant and it is a girl they don't give her that that godawful name
considering she isn't close to Esme in this story .
Lives of all vampires.

Diner
Lit in her eye.
Hopefully Bella will lose her bleeding heart and stop worrying so much about how others feel and stop blaming herself when someone screws up once she is turned
Maybe if she would stop obsessing over being clumsy maybe she wouldn't be.

Yes,fairy boy should be a smoking pile of ash.
Facilities.

The word is lose.
Why did he
not go and kill Mikael?
Surprised that fairy boy didn't try to grab her and run being the coward he is.

The God of War needs to come out and visit Mystic Meg and fairy boy and put the so called fear of God into them.

I don't understand why you have her having anything to do with fairy boy and his coven if she is so in love with Klaus.
That seems like a betrayal to him.
I think Klaus should hunt fairy boy down and smoke his creepy ass.
Losing you.

Great story! This is my 2nd full read of it.I think.u should write a small one shot on Rose & Emmett's new life as parents. I think it would be awesome!