wow okay this is beautiful!

wow
love love lvoe

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damn wow this started off so sad! But the bit with Jim was better and Yes Spock! And great ending x

Perfect! Just perfect!

Ha!

Absolutely love this friendship!

Love your stories revolving around these three! This one is amazing and very much recommended to all Star Trek fans! Great job!

You captured the vulnerability of those watching a loved one die very well; it was impressive, and painful, and made the ending that much better.

I could HEAR Kirk saying that line about backseat drivers.
And it made me laugh that the sound of arguing is what made Dr. McCoy realise he is home. That is such a Dr. M character trait.

This-was possibly one my favourite things of yours I've read so far. Dr. McCoy is, I will admit, my favourite character (when he's not annoying me). And this was beautifully written.

Aw...but his return and subsequent help in defeating whatever it was that was behind the Nexus (I never got around to watching Generations...) would have got him an even bigger hero's memorial! It'd be like, James T. Kirk: The Man that even Death Itself couldn't Keep Down.

The final part reminds me of the Afterdead series by Donna Barr. She'd created comics with a variety of characters for years, then threw all that out the airlock and created a world where people from our dimension or whatever go when they die. Her main character finds himself there and gradually settles in...and then he begins finding others he knew in his past life are also here, though at first they don't seem to remember they had lived elsewhere before this. There are also characters from other of her comics scattered through this place.
I'd actually enjoy seeing you run wild with your afterlife idea here. Since having everybody so placid is boring, would the guys go around rattling everybody back to their proper selves? Who set all this up, and what would they think about these three reclaiming their memories and will? Why would they create such a doggone boring afterlife? This would make for fun reading!

I continue to love your Triumvirate. You write all three of them so well. Thanks for posting. :)

Love Spock rampaging through the pirate ship with a ginormous gun, then being all sweet and gentle with McCoy.

Aw, this one was really sweet.

Sorry I don't have much to say beyond that, but I've never been a fan of stories based on the latter films when they are old. (I guess it reminds me that so many of the original cast-members are gone now.) Nice chapter though.