I think this story is beautiful. Personally, I'd love to see a story where there is more of an expansion of your version of Kenzi's background, but that's just me. Well-written, much respect.
BCR

wow that awesome

Whooooo I love it! I would loooove to read a sequel...(hint hint). Truly one of the best kenzi/Dyson stories out there!

Please please please, I beg of you, I've read both of your Dyson/Kenzi one shots; please do more or maybe a continuation of this or your other (I adore how you wrote for Dyson). Your two one shots are two of the best I've read and it would be great to read more from you. Either way, amazing job on both. :)

Must get a sequel! Left me wanting more! Great story! Would love to see Kenz tell her real name to Dyson and such!

I love how you incorporate her past and gettin bee those negative feelings. Well done :)

I just... really like this!

This is really good! write more?

Really nice, I hope you keep writing denzi fic :)

This is well put-together. I also like how you incorporated the Russian folk (?) song into it. Well played.

This was a reaaaalllyy good story. I enjoyed reading it. You make kenzi and dyson seem so perfect for each other and I just love that pairing. Please write more! This story is golden. :)

Always a fan of the first kiss done well and there is nothing better than a big strong man bending down taking his woman, holding her against the wall and kissing the ever lovin' stuffin' out of her... just sayin'! Till next time dear!

Great character piece! It was interwoven with the horrible-ness of her father and the hope/sweetness of dyson.

AW YISS I love everything about this. Especially the Russianisms. Gold star!

Oooh! I really hope you continue, this seems really interesting!