So cute

I /adore/ this!

This has always been my favorite freeverse:) you are amazing and I love this!

God, this was absolutely perfect :)
(the longest freeverse I've ever read too, but it just was so worth it...)
Great work :)

This was awesome!

Amazing and beutifully written, I love how you spun the words and story and everything. Great job!

This is beautiful.

So beautiful!

FREEVERSES AND WOLFSTAR seriously cassie are you trying to kill me? because i think you did wow okay wow.

i love the fairytale references and the angels and war and LUCIFER and the title is wow.

the last few lines just make me want to STRANGLEHUG YOU GURL because they do need angels, they need each other because they're so beautiful and perfect together YES

/this review is a mess, blame your writing

/pp out

Wow. That was... amazing. I really loved that. It makes me feel better, knowing I'm not the only who writes {slightly} depressing poetry. I love it, i really do. You need to write more poems like this one. I know I'd read them all.

I've run out of ways to describe how amazing your writing is. I love your writing style, there's always a hint of creepiness which i love. Great how you include such brilliant ideas into your writing, the bit about Lucifer, Red Riding Hood and so many more.
i adored the line
"before a shell hits you ,dear -

(and breaks yours)"
such a great idea.

I like how you incorporated the red riding hood tale and how you put in all the little things. :) Wonderful job!

Wow. Just, wow. That was spectacular, really, really breath taking. I loved it, it was so well written and seamless, and flowed amazingly.
This was some of the best work I've read on fanfiction.
-Speeder9319