add hinata pls

The Shi no tachi annoys me and the gullibility of Zabuza was really unbelievable

Horrible

Update bro

Image of Zabuza as a maid reminds me of Kamen no Maid Guy. An anime I really need to watch again.

Aside from that, love the interactions. The reactions and the chapter over all. That crutch grab part seemed familiar and it wasnt until I was typing this that I recalled it was a family guy episode with Lois grabbing Peter's junk saying that's where her babies come from.

Several great stories here. Though I wish they were longer.

Great chapter yet again.

Only thing bothering me is something I'm not sure of. I "think" I remember part of Marco's punishment was that he wouldnt even be allowed to join the next exam. So since he is there either I'm remembering wrong which is quite likely or the author forgot. Not a big deal but still something to notice to watch for when writing if it is the case.

Maybe I shouldn't have said that out loud…

Heh.

Cruel punishment for copping a feel and I cant imagine someone apologizing for it after losing their junk and ability to enjoy pleasure or even be with a woman for the rest of their life. Most likely unending hatred even if they were a somewhat decent guy and just wasted at the time.

Not a fan of Hinata's change on personality and that she hadn't really existed till now. Particularly her messed up words towards Neji plus crippling him with the boy still believing his dad was sacrificed because Hiashi couldn't be bothered to tell him the truth.

First and only thing about this story I would've preferred done differently.

Great chapter. I'm surprised at the lack of reprimand towards Naruko holding her teams advancement back. Especially since chuunin team ups should be fairly fluid meaning she should still be able to partner up even permanently if requested if she advanced early.

Boo though to the never with Kushina and the lack of Hinata.

more please

You are an amazing writer. Your stories are wonderful and and the plots make sense. I look forward to your next chapters with much anticipation.

loving the story. the supposedly unplanned lemon was an especially nice touch. as for Hinata I say wait and see how you have her attitude changes,be it better or worse should determine if Hinata is allowed to join the girls

You should add Hinata... One reason, Who wouldn't like a girl who admire you so much.

I say add Hinata. She’s my favorite female in Naruto regardless of how much hate she gets from people. And if her being a yandere is an issue you can easily remove that using the setup you already provided in the story. Her yandere side has only shown up for about a month now so by removing her from her toxic family like your already doing and with a little counseling you could easily convert her to something along the lines of her her alternate RTN personality. That way she can still be somewhat obsessed with Naruto but without the possibility of her killing all her sister wives in a random fit of jealousy.

Twelve year old brat wearing downright shirt, baggy pants, tall sandals, and a cape... It's unique...

Well that was a rather amusing chapter I voted no for Hinata joining the harem, even after she said her reasons for what she did I still don't want her in it, Kushina as the new Hokage well have no problems with that and Danzo got what he deserved, the first lemon well Mikoto is a babe not really bothered that she was the first even if it's slightly weird not having the first be someone his age but whatever, can't remember if Sakura's in the harem yet, but whatever I think she is eventually, as for Shikaku being Female well that's certainly a first for me lol, I wonder what happens next and wonder who gets promoted.